Tapestry of Self

Take my hand. 

Together we shall 

take the tiniest of steps

 into the path of the everywhen.

 Yes, along the way we shall stop,

 talk, discuss, enjoy, laugh, dance and… 

inhale the moments that don't matter and 

 yet can add to the tapestry of self. We can

 feel the universe sing itself a lullaby

 in the stitchings of our hearts.

 We will embrace under 

stars long burnt out.

 We must share

 our offerings

 of bliss 

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Then when all is said and done ... we get to start again... 

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

love your form for this one ... tapers my thought to such a fine point .. and must chuckle at meself ... after all that ... i get to start again ;) love your mind KWP ..love your mind!
E.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice set-up and I like the flow of thoughts leading to the very good ending. Nice to repeat the good things once again. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[sharonlee]

Clever and elegantly crafted!

[R Smith]

a lovely tapestry Elizabeth, to hear the universe sing and share bliss is the ultimate of our journey, i'm all for going now but not to keen on starting again, make my ticket one way please Bossette ^_^ X

[fattycbreezy52]

This is one of the most amazing things I have ever come across.Such a joy.I have always been fond of tapestry and stuff.So this one without any sort of hesitation,stole my heart.Gave me an immense joy .I really loved the joyful shout out.... of hope and feelings optimistic and invigorating.Count me as a fan!

[KWP]

oh well you just made my night - thank you gorgeous X

[Jamestown]

Well done my friend!
This structure is really fantastic to go along with the message:)
Creative for sure, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[KWP]

thanks JT - you are a gem - that be very true X

[Mitali Shah]

simply amazing KWP. I haven't heard or read much of lullabies but this one is the best till now for me. :) God bless dear. Your child is or will be lucky to have you.

[ANTO]

I see the concrete shape as a drip of a liquid of life with much viscosity (I imagined spermatozoa)
I loved that the quilt encompasses the self and the self encapsulates the quilt. Very deep.
The ending seemed resigned like 'here we go again' - with the use of 'must' - as if a chore - not an opportunity, which would read 'we get to start again'.

This part -
"We can
feel the universe sing itself a lullaby
in the stitchings of our hearts." - amazing KwP. The first thing I thought of was - 'hey the background noise of the Universe - a 'static' lullaby - WOW!'
Class writing my friend.
x

[KWP]

Ahh well of course you were right ... We not be Needin' any more daily chores ... So I changed it ... Come ride with me on the lullaby merrigoround of life ...

PS - Deadmau - Class ❤️❤️❤️

[ANTO]

The lullaby merrigoround of life - sublime !
You're a wonderful clump of universal material dear friend. - I would ride with you to the end of space.

[KWP]

a 'clump' hahahahahahahahahahahahaha that is the funniest compliment I have ever received ... I Know one things for sure ... if we did ride till the end of space we sure would keep each other entertained ... XXXX

[ANTO]

I had a backup plan in case clump didnt agree with you lol
I was going to go with it being an acronym for
Clever Loving Unselfish Maginficent Person
yep we sure would
xx

[ANTO]

*Magnificent

[KWP]

I love it that you had a back up plan ... For that I shall bring your back up guitar on our travels X

[ANTO]

lol - don't forget the g-string - can't play my guitar without my g-string ;p

[ANTO]

I feel like writing a poem where the guy whispers sweet nothings into his lovers ears and ends with - "I love you, my clump' - perhaps he'll get a thump ! xD

[KWP]

g-string guitar player ... m m m m m ... I'm gonna pack my clippers too then ... you know just in case ;)

and yes yes I love you my clump, you make my organs pump ... hmmm too rude to quick ... sorry my wee brain always cascades everso fast to the gutter ... ooooops XX

[ANTO]

I was just listening to a track that I am sending you - as soon as I saw the image on the video of the two dolphins jumping in the sunset I went - KWP ! - and here you are pumping my clump my lovely lady humps. lmao

[KWP]

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha ....

[KWP]

it's five am here and that is one might fine way to start the day ... your range of words astounds me ... 'Love is my clump and me' ;)

[KWP]

its whale watching season here .... there is also a pod of dolphins that hangs out near where I walk my dog ... don'tcha just love synchronicity ?

[KWP]

just got to the lyrics ... ahh yep ... I should meditate to that .... ooohhhh yerrrrrr ... I will yes yes i will on the train this mornin .. XX

[ANTO]

my wordage astounds you?? - anyone who said a word like 'synchronicty' to me at 5 a.m. their time; I would suspect of witchcraft (of the white kind of course) x

[Gabriel's Last Breath (..]

creative and motivating. good job in capturing the moment

[andrew mitchell]

Very clever write KWP Reminds me of Neil Armstrong One small step for me one big step for mankind . Loved this piece! and all intertwined