An Art Worth Perfecting

an art 

yes indeed I would have to say it is an art 

intricate in the breeze 

at one with the winds 

yet still flickering 

within every breath 

definitely takes practice

to move into a caravan of lights

navigating the present 

of each moment after moment

after moment

it can take a lifetime

to comprehend 

the guiding light

the master

the sage

was always there 

will always be 

will we ever understand 

love 

true love

is egoless

it is the very force uniting us 

whilst we still 

after a millennia

choose to be divided

but to truly know - just know 

because we always have -

we are being buoyed 

by universal vitality 

and no matter 

what decisions we make 

what events unfold 

how we live 

when we die 

they are all passing moments 

in a grander scheme

a bigger picture 

called

eternity 

where the buoying 

shall never cease 

and we shall be 

cushioned by love 

in the life force 

the one that 

is the all

until forever 

ahh yes

now that my friend 

is an art worth perfecting 

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

I do agree with your deep words, yes, the love - true love's always seemed to be 'egoless', though... the heart becomes 'egoistic'. It wants to cage the love; trap the love into the strong shackles of its spirit not to let it fly away; not to let it walk on by it. Beautiful imagery you've come up with. Liked your passion 'bout "Writing". I've figured out, you daily post at least one poetry of yous which means... you write daily and that's all what a passionate writer does throughout the day. Sounds creative. Liked your faith in literature. Most of your writes're on nature where I see a very beautiful glimpse of love & art beloved together with each others... in one piece. Well written!

[andrew mitchell]

"The master, the sage, was always there" terrific stuff KWP I like those very lines in the magic you weaved.:)