The Unfurling

It is said that
to lose oneself complete
in the act of love making
allows a special glimpse
of divinity
........


Hey lover
can you feel
the yearning
in my touch
utterly consumed in
desire for
all of you

Right now ....
You are the only quench
to my thirst
allow me to drink
from your cup
of overflowing
lust ....

Touch my naked skin
as if you are stroking
the finest Persian silks
and I shall undress
your essence
into abandon

Feel the depth
encased in warmth
dripping in love
Ahhhh yes .....

Please let me
taste you ....
your being
the you only
yourself knows
promise to let go

As you kiss
tenderly
there ... Yes there
Ahhhh ...
Watch and enjoy the act
as I unfurl

Come
please join me
for this state of bliss
must be shared
as one

Rhythmic
balletic
harmonious
delicate
motions of
becoming
In this moment

Rise
and rise
together we
see the peak

A place holding no
music
words
explanation

An explosion in
light
colour
serenity
found in
the crescendo
if divinities
never ending
song

Ahhhhhh.....
the melodic ripples
become distant
as we sink into the
folds of flesh
once more

Just a glimpse, just a glimpse

Reviews

[daninstockholm]

Just a glimpse, just a glimpse

and a beautiful glimpse it is,, lovely edible delicious lines flow from Your pen as if by magic,, love every line in this!!!

[sharonlee]

Delicious lines woven here.

[ANTO]

Number 13 KWP and this is not an unlucky one at all.
I loved this
"Watch and enjoy the act
as I unfurl " - great metaphorical write.
Im way behind on my RRs .. sorry this is late
Coaches should not have excuses !!
:)

[KWP]

thanks coach - hope all is well your side X

[ANTO]

Thanks KWP - Im grand. Always better after seeing you :))

[Adam Adams]

What a fluent! Loved it.
"Just a glimpse" is way enough to bring loved-spirits "The melody of heart / the echoes of night". Yes, one glimpse under the moon makes the night more bliss by means of naked bodies. The enmity helps "The Unfurling" looking more 'Furled" in love. You portray your heart .. in this piece. Enjoyed it fully.. with the great flow of your tempted words. You're seemed on fire to this page. Excellent. Great job!

[KWP]

Well that's a lovely bunch of words ... I was hoping to go deep ... It's not always easy ... Cheers my friend X

[andrew mitchell]

very few words are spoken during lovemaking apart from sighs, ooooh's and rrrrr's and O's and more, more more! a slap noise here a smootch noise there as we wrestle our emotions together shared in a game of love! fantastic! KWP :):)

[KWP]

why thank you for explaining those funny noises so well ;)
ha smooch - such an Aussie word XX

[Jamestown]

Well written piece, excellent rhythm and wording is terrific,
You really pieced this together in my opinion flawless,
completely enjoyed reading, very sensual and sexy!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed:)

[KWP]

hey there Jamestown - why thank you for reading sunshine and I am glad you liked it ... toying with lovemaking through words - not easy for me ;) X