Surpassing Emotion

Surpassing Emotion

A Poem by KWP

come dance with me 

there is a place I know 

everybody is welcome 


BLISS 

emotions not required

emotions no longer desired


time on earth 

is often spent

following the path of emotion 


Happy

Sad

Guilty

Glad

Ecstatic

Mad

Stop!


come dance with me 

there is a place I know

everybody is welcome


destination BLISS

upon entry 

you must let go ……………………………….

© 2015 KWP


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Just where do you get off missus - sending me an RR for a pome I already reviewed (joking KwP).
This place sounds like the ultimate getaway though.
Beautifully done. !


Posted 9 Years Ago


KWP

9 Years Ago

oh gawd well who knew ? ?
Just reading your work takes your reader to Bliss destination...

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Destination bliss,all aboard life's rollercoaster,but be sure to hang on......could end up anywhere
I'd like to agree with Anto and the reposing, half naked man,but haven't a clue what they are on about.I didn't know whether to descend or ascend,up or down,a quandary for this un yo yo ish fella..

Posted 9 Years Ago


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There is a place for everyone to go
for pure bliss

i know mine :)

Simply cool

Posted 9 Years Ago


This has a calming effect. An interesting format with nice flow of words. Lovely :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice "W-A-V-E" you've waved ov'r the page alongwith fortunate words.

"BLISS... emotions not required... emotions no longer desired.. " Yes, in the space of heart, there's no need for heartaches or emotions, only the love's enough to beloved, danced along its blissful destination. Beautiful poetry you've come up with. Rhythmically poetic art.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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You had me at: come and dance :)
I can see you want to get rid of those emotions, but unfortunately when i try that the bad somehow pulls the good ones away with them. and for that, i have no bliss recipe :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


A nice write KWP like sliding down a slippery dip into bliss as per your format, Clever :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Its still fantastic formatted write!:)
imagine dancing down those steps, stripping away those emotions as we go :)
i love the write and idea!
Please reserve me a place :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


I really liked the 'escalator-visual' formatting device you chose but it also struck me as being like the ballast that hot air balloons used to use - here it is emotional ballast - like sand-bags being dropped off one by one allowing the vehicle to rise and transcend into the heady heights of an emotion-free atmosphere.
Your great imagery writing always in turn fires off more imagery KwP.
Well done my friend.
x

Posted 9 Years Ago


KWP

9 Years Ago

ahhh that's peaky .... (i have no idea what that means - but I want to remind myself not to 'peak t.. read more

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Added on April 10, 2015
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Sydney, NSW, Australia



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