Just where do you get off missus - sending me an RR for a pome I already reviewed (joking KwP).
This place sounds like the ultimate getaway though.
Beautifully done. !
Destination bliss,all aboard life's rollercoaster,but be sure to hang on......could end up anywhere
I'd like to agree with Anto and the reposing, half naked man,but haven't a clue what they are on about.I didn't know whether to descend or ascend,up or down,a quandary for this un yo yo ish fella..
Nice "W-A-V-E" you've waved ov'r the page alongwith fortunate words.
"BLISS... emotions not required... emotions no longer desired.. " Yes, in the space of heart, there's no need for heartaches or emotions, only the love's enough to beloved, danced along its blissful destination. Beautiful poetry you've come up with. Rhythmically poetic art.
You had me at: come and dance :)
I can see you want to get rid of those emotions, but unfortunately when i try that the bad somehow pulls the good ones away with them. and for that, i have no bliss recipe :)
I really liked the 'escalator-visual' formatting device you chose but it also struck me as being like the ballast that hot air balloons used to use - here it is emotional ballast - like sand-bags being dropped off one by one allowing the vehicle to rise and transcend into the heady heights of an emotion-free atmosphere.
Your great imagery writing always in turn fires off more imagery KwP.
Well done my friend.
x
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
ahhh that's peaky .... (i have no idea what that means - but I want to remind myself not to 'peak t.. read moreahhh that's peaky .... (i have no idea what that means - but I want to remind myself not to 'peak too soon' you know drag it out, make it last, surpass emotion to feel one almighty release of BLISS) peak peak peak X
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