Lost Without Any Compunction To Be Found

We have it all within us ... Let's explore

Lost in
Transition
along the path

Ahh no ....
Don't come find me
enjoy the jaunt
in the fields
of fetish
of delight
of horror
of love and desire
I must

For surely
if we do not explore
each and every last
avenue
essence
whirlwind
back alley
of life

We shall never
come to
know ourselves
complete

Tell me
Who were you
before you were
born to
this life?

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

A very nice work again which is questioning my life. I have not found my past life and this may be my first journey to this place called earth. Curious place and creatures that I have had to assimilate to look like one of them. So that is my previous life and soon to be again. Thank you

fun questioning piece.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Another flowing piece that describes human transition and the dilemmas we face in deciding what to explore and what is taboo.

[KWP]

nice one John - thanks for your time - much appreciated X

[ANTO]

"Ahh no ....
Don't come find me..." - Class lines. Sounds like a wonderful new game - Hide and go hide (yerself). But the sentiment isn't one of wanting to avoid being found but wanting all to share in the modern-day Shang-Ri-La that the writer has found (or rather their own version of same).
Taste all that life has to offer and find the real YOU again.
Sublime writing KwP - I hope you havent peaked too sure - Im sure you havent -

"Who said you could have a rest ...Come on poet - knees up!!"
:))

[KWP]

Hide and go hide yerself - that's a classic!!! I think your mind runs ahead of you at times - brilliant!

Peaked to soon - - ah ah ahhhhhhh - no don't worry I can back up - more than once - - ;)

[ANTO]

LOL @ "ah ah ahhhhhhh" - is that the famous restaurant scene from When ANTO met KwP
xD

[KWP]

..... ;) perhaps - perhaps - hehehe X

[ANTO]

good evening K, (morning here)
;)
x

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Life is an endless lesson, so everyday we learn, therefore we are continually evolving as an individual.

[Einstein Noodle]

yes ... all the deepest and darkest recesses ... no shrinking back .. no turning in horror ... we must gather our strength and calm ourselves as we can ... stand and open those doors ... AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!

oh! i'm not that bad! :)))
have to say KWP .. i am very grateful for you and your expressions in poetry ..
E.

[KWP]

Aaaaaaahhhhh and I am grateful for you ... Yes yes ... I am ... Your dog is not a wee fella is he ? X

[Einstein Noodle]

this is Bella .. the wonder she dog :)) 120 lbs over wee ;) hugs K

[andrew mitchell]

the second stanza I picture two lovers, the woman in pursuit running over the sand dunes only to let him catch her and then unbridled passion. lol Another great aussie write KWP oi oi oi!