Kiss Me

give yourself over complete ...

kiss me 

and when you do  

release 

kiss me absolute

that feeling you get when you 

are utterly absorbed

 translate that feeling 

into the kiss 

 suspend yourself 

in that moment 

release yourself 

to the unshackling

as I promise to do the same 

touch me 

and when you do 

extend your touch 

in the everlasting 

so i can feel 

your every intention

let’s blow each other’s

 intentions 

open for each breath 

of the eternal

taste me

and when you do 

navigate your way 

to the deepest depths 

where you shall find me 

perched

on the abyss 

of total abandon

awaiting your arrival 

please join with me

complete 

let us hover a while

as we shed more layers

naked bodies

naked souls

let’s float 

in eternity 

entering each breath

enjoying the gift of the glimpse 

of the everywhen

away from the veils

the conditioning 

the need to be 

something 

anything

anyone . . . . .

ahhhhh 

kiss me 

touch me

taste me

join with me 

as we remember 

once more

what it means to be free

Reviews

[Border]

In my opinion the author has depicted the cosmic union of the nature, the instinctual actions that holds the universe.
This poem forces one to kiss, touch, taste, join and repeat it over and over again, in the celestial dance of bringing together the male and female energies

[KWP]

nice understanding well done ... X

[andrew mitchell]

A sleeping beauty tale this is for that kiss! :)

[andrew mitchell]

Hi KWP You are a talent beyond the sydney horizon, up there to be noticed and so enjoyed. Amazed by your concise flowing imagery pieces you project. Such a art to read!

[KWP]

Hey down there Andrew and thank you for boosting my ego ... Someone's gonna have to prick me so I fizz that puffy head of mine right out again - I am currently participating in the NaPoWrMo which is basically write a poem every day for the month of April - so I am wondering just how it's all gonna fizzle out for me ... La - Di - Dah I will either go real deep and no one will uderstand me or I will swim in the surface where no one understands me - ha! That's a win win I suppose X

[cycy]

wow i can really feel the intensity through every word,,well written indeed though slightly overwhelming hahaha very well done dear

[Sindu]

Um.. hello? Where can I get one of these? I read this when you posted it but I thought I'll review it second time around. I do that when something overwhelms me. I guess this was too steamy for me to comment on then, hehe :P But I see more energy and emotion in this as much as passion. One of those brave moments when you can let go and be! Muah Beth..

[KWP]

ummm hello - you just gotta take what yours and go for gold ;)

haha you make me laugh - too steamy - love it .. you read my words so well ... are you camping in my head?

[Sindu]

You may never know that.. :P

[catwoman]

i just really want to experience what you so beautifully portrayed..i absolutely loved it :)

[KWP]

yeah know what you mean - I am getting better at it :)

[Parimal Pratyush]

This was refreshing. I managed some time for my passion at last and this is my prize for it. Great great work and a better read for me. I need a kiss.. :-*

[KWP]

I do hope you found one ... ;-) Xn

[The Twin Arenas]

indeed. it's the only beach.

"release yourself
to the unshackling"

that's a good one. can't go wrong with "unshackling." What a word.

[A. Amos]

Wow...I felt your work and I surely know whoever read or would read feel the same!

[KWP]

oh hello you who pops in from the universe - thanks for reading and lovely to see you X

[A. Amos]

You're writing make one feel alive in this busy world of illusions, thank you for writing my friend...

[....................]

Absorbed and unshackled with total abandonment; everlasting and free... the way love ought to be. A beautiful write KWP.