Sleepwalking through Dreams

Sleepwalkers
All of us

Switched on to the
Dreaming
Switched off to
The whole shebang

Diggity Dang
The whole shebang!

All but a
Reflection
Of perception
With anticipated
Perfection

What we feel is
Percieved
Never to be
Relieved
Of life and it's deeds

We sleep on
Eyes closed and blind
As actuality passes by

Goodnight

Reviews

[Parimal Pratyush]

Very versatile.. And it's you of course, ma'am.. So no surprises.. Loved it. :D

[KWP]

hey Parimal :) thanks for reading - I am glad you didn't get surprised ... BOO!!

[Daydreamer]

One goes to bed alive as the senses anticipate brimming dreams... but most wake up into the same hollowness of oblivion ... though the universe never sleeps...

YOU.

[Ruth]

And wow...and there is not much that can be added to that perfection, excellent :) xo

[CC Faye]

This reminded me of a Japanese song band named Sleepwalkers, and I have to say that this poem has some humour in it. It's beautiful and I could imagine myself traveling my dreams. This is the best poem that I have ever read!

[KWP]

ahhh thank you CC - I am so glad you enjoyed it - best ever !! How cool :) xx

[Tech]

Has a beat poem feel to it that I personally don't see very often and admire when done correctly and you did it perfectly. Very fun and glad you shared it with us :).

[KWP]

Hey there stranger - well thanks for reading :) hope all is well your side - love to hear how you are getting on with things - oh and phew glad the poem came off too ...

[ANTO]

'Diggity Dang
The whole shebang! " - I love the fun the writer is having here and the fact that they incorporate it into the writing - makes it something extra for the reader.

we are on autopilot a lot of our lives - not totally connected with the thing we call reality - the huge amount of signals that our sensors pick up and assemble as our reality.

I can hear the lamp rocker switch click the light off at the last line and leave the reader with lots of musings - in their own darkness and thinking...
Very cool KWP

[KWP]

hey ho Anto - cheers for your thoughts they are much appreciated :) oh and lovely to make your acquaintance X

[ANTO]

And yours ! Go Raibh Mile Maith agat KWP
x

[KWP]

and I just looked that wee phrase up - and right back atcha sunshine :)

T'was like us
Damn few
But they're all
F*ckin' dead

(please excuse the expletives - but I do love that saying)

[ANTO]

Lmao - oohh you can take the woman out of Ireland but you can;t take Ireland out of the woman ! roll on the 17th for the worlds biggest parteee
Theres only two kinds of people that day - those who ARE Irish and those who WISH THEY WERE Irish ! - you feeling me KWP ??
xDD

[KWP]

oh yeah - I am a feelin' ya XX

[Anand Sehgal]

Switched on to the
Dreaming
Switched off to
The whole shebang


awesome expression :) loved it :)

[Stephen]

What a Rape, Oh I meant, Rap! One of my fav. writes for sure!

To me, the write's full of fun that makes me smiley with such deepen words you've used to this piece. Sometimes, it's really hard to write such verses which make the poetry so easy-reading, but I think, you have make it all so easy-going. So smoothly you have written this. So peacefully you have shaped the game of words. Now, I gotta say that you have well played with words in this write that I damn loved `bout you & your write. Enjoyed the time with your pages!

Note: You (& your talent) goddamn getting damn hotter `n hotter, sexy than sexier day by day... night by night.. soul to souls (words to words).. hell, heart to hearts (creation to creations). Keep writing!

[KWP]

ha ha too kind you be - but I shall take your words nonetheless and bask out in the sun with them for while xx

[Stephen]

~ Lol xoxo ~

[....................]

Life is but a dream in which we often walk with our eyes closed to that which we wish to avoid opening them only to see what we want. Well, not really, at least not always, but you get the point. I loved this write KWP! - FT

[KWP]

thanks for reading FT - nice to see you here :)

[....................]

You are welcome KWP and it's good to be here :)

[Chris]

Occasionally some of us awaken and remember how to smile BEFORE we lay down and nap again.

[KWP]

thanks for reading Chris - I hope many smile - there is much to smile at : )))