Fully Loaded

Strip me of all I know so I can return to the original truth

here I am
fully loaded
my misconceptions
precariously balanced
to tip-toe through life

feel the weight
fully laden
ethnospheric conditioning
weighted upon my shoulders
no end to this strife

I ask you
for no knowledge
instead - please - strip me barest
to know lightness of being
witness my undoing

unravel - please
with your softest touch
longingly aching waiting
cast me back into the winds
uniting the heartbeats once more

Reviews

[willweb]

This was beautiful KWP. A longing for what was from deep in your heart. I really enjoyed this today.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Return to the original truth, how much we long for this, and all other desire became recessive,
I ask you,
For no knowledge
instead, strip me .....
lovely lines and expression
thankyou.

[R Smith]

after the mysteries and trials of materialism you come longing for release, to be cleansed of this weight we bear by pursuing a life we are given to believe is true, hence strip your learning, take away the misconceptions and wants of I, I, I, to be released into the light and truth of who you really are, excellent writing Elizabeth in the pursuit of reality of ourselves as against the pursuit of material existence, or maybe i'm just getting carried away by talking too much :)

[KWP]

That's if boss and no you are not getting carried away ... We are all headed that way even if we know it or not .. X

[R Smith]

thank you Chef X

[Rene Salinas]

The possibility of becoming boundless is a shared feeling for me. So many things to ties us down so many traps and snares set about. Is not as if it was a test it feels more like a challenge built to last. But in this crafty lines the desire to go through the experiences and understand in such a way that the outcome continues to guide us through the challenge. As if we would be able to make the light that warmth the path out of our own effort out of our own conviction , sincerity and impulse.

That right there is a skill worth having, in the meantime the backpack is heavy...

Thankyou

[KWP]

Thanks Rene ... Yes... Boundless ... We travel on similar waves through eternity ... Now and then ;-)