Existence Soup

thinking about existence v's non-existence and if any of it matters and throwing it all into a soup of words

drift away 

float

expunge 

teachings taught

wisdoms sought

blank 

zero 

naught

strip away 

shed

dissolve 

meanings meant 

perceptions pent

sliding 

into 

descent

disintegrate 

conscious

form

infinitely seeing

nihility being

now 

you’re 

gone

Reviews

[Nisreen]

Very nicely done
i love the style and structure

this mimics the existence of a thought to me
how it comes to life .... and dissipates ......

Two thumbs up !!!

[Dash the Reaper]

i like what you have done with the random words here & a catchy title too

[Desert Rose]

story of my life (^^)
simply & elegantly illustrated

with just a few words, you showed that life is about learning, then you just die knowing that you won't truly apply these learnings elsewhere..
not to mention how you cleverly used minimalism to accent just how short life is..
3 paras, birth, growth & death..

this was brilliant..

[andrew mitchell]

KWP you have done it again in splendid writing. All I can say is what a b***h!! Just kidding!! awesome poetry from a sydney sider. You never disappoint my friend.

[KWP]

not the first time I have been called as such - probably not the last either ;)

cheers bud - haven't been around much lately - hope all is well well well X

[andrew mitchell]

i meant it in an adoring way kwp.

[KWP]

oh I know ;p

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Only the very essential exists and remains. Well done, KWP. :) Rudi

[Unknown Poet]

Awesome I loved this
Powerful words ....
Fabulous job

[Philip Muls]

Sophisticated randomness of words used as means to demonstrate the impermanence of things.

Cleverly done. It leaves a taste for more.

[KWP]

hey there Philip - cheers for the read XXX

[Maglia Weaver Twill]

I love it so much, that is something we all wonder sometime and it's all "meanings meant perceptions pent" ok I can 'roll' with that, or tread along rather

[KWP]

ahh thanks for reading Magila and so lovely to meet you :)

[Daydreamer]

Nice title by the waaayy :P

[Daydreamer]

Sooo babe, the soup keeps being stirred, the ingredients collide with the world through which they are contained & one another ofcourse..... Once the "meaning" is found, and the fires light up on the inside, and the veins get ardent ;), we get to LIVE and no time is often left to realise, so we're gone in a flashing moment :o