Become Love

... so I have been reading some Osho lately :) .....

lay with me 

share this occasion

of love 

be the love 

soften the all that is you

for I love you 

and you say you love me 

no fear 

no need for ego 

lolling together

longingly lovingly 

embrace me 

together we shall

be the embrace and

dissolve into each others

eternity

kiss me 

and let us together 

be the kiss 

we are the kiss

as we become lost in 

the everywhen

look at me 

see me not with your eyes

see me only in our unified blinding love

the same love

seamlessly holding us 

in the absolute

feel me 

touch me 

caress me 

stroke me 

away - into

the folds of nirvana

become the motions 

forget the performer 

presented to the world

remember 

the ebullient

ever present

love

outpouring whirlwinds 

amorous devotion 

for you 

you 

      you

become love with me

we shall momentarily 

lose ourselves 

and become one again 

in the everlasting 

Author's Note

tell me anything that grabs you ... it all good ... all of it :)

Reviews

[Kasey Miriam]

I love the line and stanza breaks. Very well done poem. Romantic and filled with emotion.

[KWP]

thanks chick ... this is more recent and refined :) xx

[The Black Warrior]

Beautiful! Very romantic, eloquent and elegant!

Well done!

~Suk

[Christopher Robin]

Intimately lyrical satirical lyrics.

I'll leave cadence out of this, this should be sung.

-Robin

[Matching Socks]

Into the folds of nirvana...

Wow!! I just love this one. It's so gorgeous, romantic, sensual...

[David Scott]

I like the way this poetry drifts the soul of the reader like a fog drifting within the forest of love.
Very lovely poetry!

[KWP]

that's a delightful review David - thank you for sharing xx

[A. Amos]

I really have no words to describe the strength of your poem, one of the most romantic poem I ever read! I truly am your fan, I wish the whole world can read your work. I feel myself lucky to live in epoch, where I can read and witness your art!
Trust me you really are wonderful writer and deserve to be well acknowledge in the world of writing.

[KWP]

ahhh thank you A.A you inspire me to write on, write on, you make a fabulous writing coach for me :) LOVE xx

[A. Amos]

Oh come on, I really am just a humble writer, seriously I can't wait to read your book.

[KWP]

your positive vibrant ways keep me writing ... (Book with Editor) - waiting ....

[A. Amos]

I still am waiting for synopsis:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

What this world needs more of and cannot get enough of is love, and we only achieve that when we start looking with our hearts and not our eyes. You got this free verse down now, fine piece of uplifting poetry.

[KWP]

thank you sunshine ... thanks for reading ... sending love xx

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are most welcome hon xoxo

[R Smith]

a great poem, i love the structure of the verses it has passion mixed with beauty and i like the way you took it into a two become one ending as though through love the lovers are now united forever in a paradise of their making, great! :)

[KWP]

cheers Richard I am glad you enjoyed ... just playing around with swirling thoughts at the moment xx

[NoelHC]

Another foray into free association, free form, free verse, I know you have told me that rhyming is easier for you and that this form is a challenge. I believe you arose to the challenge, in fine form.

[KWP]

hey Noel - thank you ... actually I find that when my brain simmers the free verse appears ... it's a nice place to hang out ... cheers for reading xx

[Tree]

This was like a dream, some transcendental like journey into a good, and loving self. I, the reader, felt almost hypnotized. I like the idea of becoming love, becoming better than Me. I wonder if it's true what most teachers and spiritual institutions teach you. That you have to tap into something greater than yourself.

a magical write.


Diego

[KWP]

perfectly read Diego and thank you so much, i believe that you are the something greater already, our mind has just separated itself with consciousness, we just need to let it all go and see it clearly once more ... can you read 'Noticing the Now' because that is exactly what I was trying to achieve in that poem xx

[KWP]

oh and thanks so much for reading xx

[Tree]

I'll be sure to give that a read, thanks KWP.

Diego