Ecstasy in Inertia

.... learning to just be .......

Stillness
Quiet mind
Inertia
Rhythm find
Calming wave
Floating through
Knowing space
Vision true
Observing self
Breathe by breath
Emancipation
Freedom to rest

Reviews

[Norman T]

I enjoyed the "no worries" laid back tone of this poem. Just right for an old retiree like me.
Norman

[KWP]

ha! No worries mate!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle and peaceful words led the reader to a clam place. I like the flow of thoughts and the want in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Chris]

How goes tomorrow? Good seeing you.

Gave me a sense of "heaviness" - weighing down - and wanting to just move a bit.

[KWP]

heaviness in a warm cosy blanketing kind of way?

wanting to move to be at one with the flow? Or perhaps to grab to practice the ritual of making another cup whilst reflecting on the everywhen ??

thanks for visiting ... as always LOVE xx

[Chris]

I felt a bit of impatience within the word flow actually. Like a lot of life energy held in place.

[KWP]

i understand ... how about allowance of vitality to embody your being ?

[Chris]

allowance? - nah, an acceptance of - oh yeah...

[KWP]

oh yeah ... its all there as nothing at all and never was :)

[redflutterby]

Humans need to stop and feel stillness once in awhile. We all rush around to much and have lost our connection with peaceful being. Very nice poem...

[KWP]

thanks chick chick ... agree wholeheartedly x

[willweb]

There was a certain peace to this that washed from the screen and engulfe me, This was absolutely beautiful. I really enjoyed this today.

[KWP]

heyyyy willweb .. thank you .. you made my morning ... hope your day is spectacular xx

[Einstein Noodle]

yummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm! the kinetic state of no mind .. now i go to my lotus position ... if i am not back in ten .. ring the bell :)
E.

[KWP]

no way if you are not back in ten you are exactly where you are meant to be ... LOVE xxx

[Einstein Noodle]

love peace and flowers to you! :))

[Eve Ola]

I found real ecstasy by this write. FREEDOM TO REST .. Awesome

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

We all need to step outside our comfort some on occasion, but oohing is more soothing than the comforts of home.

[NoelHC]

I felt an ebb and flow to this as a read, like waves lapping a shoreline, beautifully put together.

[Frieda P]

I love the stillness here. I want to start chanting OM in the sounds of cosmic consciousness your poem invokes. Good one Betty, are you always this serene? :) x

[KWP]

ha - no I bounce from here to there to everywhere - generally drive everybody mad while I am at it too - not in a good way - hehehehe - oh well moment to moment ....

[KWP]

sending love gorgeous lady ..... love love love