Reflections

Fire reflected through ones soul

Burning desire to be whole

Journey long, lessons learned

Ego lost, wisdom earned

Reviews

[B.J]

Great words. Right to the point.

[Shadow Paradox]

I wish I could add this to my favorites but WC is not letting me. This what I am going through right now and this piece really touched something deep within me. We all make mistakes and mistakes are the ground we can build our self up on in way as long as we learn from them. Then we will grow upwards into something beautiful and with strength and wisdom because of the lessons and trials endured in life. The burnt edges of our lives makes for a good story. Love this piece.

[KWP]

hey ... thanks for the words ... I am delighted you could relate ... when I sit and look back upon my journey so far these words complete it for me

[Shadow Paradox]

I understand and you are welcome.

[LL]

Very simple but very true indeed.

[KWP]

hey Levi ... thanks for your thoughts x x :D

[LL]

Hey, your always welcome... :)

[Daydreamer]

Wow!!! Love the last two lines the most xx
Catchy!!
You're living wholly, that's what I love about you!
you're beamin' xx and you remind me how beautiful it feels when I beam too!

[KWP]

that right there ... what you just said ... makes me beam in all the colors of the rainbow ... it makes everything worthwhile ... thank you

[Daydreamer]

Hahaahah!!! See how sweet and loving I am? LOL
stay blessed xx

[Tech]

I've read through a few of your poems and I really enjoy your ability to make short but meaningful writings. It takes a very natural writer to make something that can touch another's heart but a seasoned writer to make it meaningful and concise.

[KWP]

Hey well thanks I appreciate that very much ... I am but a beginner, but that allows me to see with fresh eyes to learn ... x x

[Tech]

Fooled me lol seems you already have a style of your own.

[Kieta!]

Short but sweet and very thought-provoking! Great job :)

[NoelHC]

Beautiful< I see these words stenciled on a wall, in a cursive script, maybe in a room with a huge, wood-burning fire place in it.
Pleased to make your acquaintance, thank you for the friend request, I see we have many in common.

[KWP]

Hey Noel, happy to meet you too - Yay !! thanks for reading .. and yes maybe I will put that above my fire ... well that's if I had i fire ... doesn't get too cold out my way ;)

[NoelHC]

So I understand, a good friend comes from there, but lives in Canada now. I think it would still be smashing to put these words in a room that all your guests could see it.

[Marie]

Very good thought in these few, simple words.

[KWP]

Thanks Marie reminded me of your style x

[Einstein Noodle]

simple but true! ego lost is one of the hardest parts of it .. takes the most time .. causes undo pain and suffering .. one of our greatest of foibles i think ;)
E.

[KWP]

there's always something jumping up and down testing us x x

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like how these words read, it creates a nice rhythm and rhyme. I see this piece of writing as someone wanting to become whole but they must learn many lessons and let go of their ego in order to gain wisdom. A nice way to put it in such a small space.

Good Job

[KWP]

you got it ... thank you soul sista x x

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

lol You're welcome and yay xD I understood it correctly lol