Pure Love

Detection

Of

Perfection

Creating

A Tidy Deflection

Today I think

I may Try

A different flavour

Of Sweet Pie

Permeating sensations

Delivered from above

Mixing

Together

To make pure love

Reviews

[Christopher Robin]

A deflection of what? Feels like it should be 'reflection' considering the rest of the piece.

Very different from you, and very good, the formatting makes it come alive.
Nicely penned,

-Robin

[KWP]

thanks boss ... always appreciate your thoughts ... xx (i will reflect on reflection to find another perfection)

[Christopher Robin]

Anytime, awesomeness like this needs to be seen and praised.

-Robin

[Awakened Rose]

Wow. This is alchemical. Beautiful. Thank you for sharing I enjoyed this very much!!

[hardeep sabharwal]

lovely, and nicely flowed
good job

[NoelHC]

"Sweet" and to the point, nicely and efficiently written.

[Chris]

a sense of playfulness and teasing and yet an awaiting of something...for something...an elusive feeling.

[willweb]

All of the ingredients needed, falling into your hands and heart. Beautiful.

[Ruth]

Mastering the art of balance gives life more flavour and tones to write about, lovely x

[R Smith]

cookery and love mixed in a pie of togetherness, I love this poem, just the style, the construction, the rhyme's its a little piece of heaven like sweet pie. One for the library i think :)

[Rene Salinas]

I share with this writing the view that at times it feels as if there are forces namely materilitis forces that helps us to lay foundation for something to be built upon. This forces seem to come from below , the blood , sweat and tears needed to dig and build I guess. But what is one to put on top of it as we know materilstic forces alone have the tendency to decay. We look up and with open arms we embrace what is to come from above. Love that is in this case. Love that that warms the poor shepherd hearts, that enlightens the wise kings’ heads.

To make pure love.

Thankyou

[wordman]

and sweet love it was if sent from above