As One

tell me what you really think sexies !!

walking alone, chilled mornings

winter promising to return

waves breaking, listlessly humming  

dawn edging light back in for a new day

thoughts laced with the essence of you

saturated and dripping 

wet with emotions

thoughts clung to the flesh 

the same flesh that 

created the illusion 

for the world to see

all was fine

darkened days offering 

blackened nights

existence trivial

nothing left to gain…..

walking alone, crisp mornings

spring kissing the day with

fresh zest, vigour of new life

life - seeking for itself 

splendour of being

knowing for the first time 

magic of hope

of faith

lightness sweeping 

along the path once more

leaving behind -

an unwritten good bye

finally the thought of you

sheltered in me 

no more

sitting alone, 

acquainting myself

with the empty space

between my thoughts -

no emotions

nothing to cling to 

attachment not known

yet knowing warmth, comfort 

for the first time

finally letting you go 

suffering no longer 

allowing the sweet air to kiss my face

knowing

‘it is what it is’

we shall meet again

this time 

we shall meet

in that empty space

the quietude of space 

between our thoughts

our love will come full circle

realising 

we have always been together

as one

this newfound 

love above love

shall flow eternally 

allowing us to always be 

Reviews

[Justin]

that was really good, i enjoyed reading it :)

[Justin]

that was really good!!! i enjoyed reading it :)

[MsJewel]

The entire poem is lovely, but these lines spoke to me:
‘it is what it is’
we shall meet again
this time
we shall meet
in that empty space
the quietude of space
between our thoughts

Such beautiful thoughts here..I love the softness of your words. A beautiful, beautiful poem

:) Julie

[KWP]

Hey Julie,
Thanks for stopping by within your moments, I appreciate you reading x x
read moreHey Julie,
Thanks for stopping by within your moments, I appreciate you reading x x

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[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love certainly has its ups and downs… Love never deserts us, it is the people we love that do it. Wonderfully written young lady.

[KWP]

thank you sunshine ... it needs attention, but so does love and we all have so little time .... hope all is well x x

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome, tea things are good here. I hope the same for you.

[Woody]

words penned by a true poet, an artist, a sensitive soul. I rest my case.

[KWP]

:) wayyyy too kind you are - thanks for reading sunshine, much appreciated indeedy x x

[A. Amos]

‘it is what it is’
we shall meet again
this time
we shall meet
in that empty space
the quietude of space
between our thoughts

These above lines were my favorites, the whole read was awesome...as always brilliant my friend

[KWP]

thanks my friend for reading x

[ms. barrie]

This is gorgeous, eloquent poignant imagery, wonderful choice
Of words, so many amazing lines in this write...I
Personally think this is stunning. Thanks for sharing! :)))

[KWP]

thanks you made my morning ... I appreciate you reading very much ! have a fab day or night or both :) xxx

[ms. barrie]

You welcome! Thank you...same to you! :)