Remember Love

....just that...

Encroaching Fears

 ReluctantTears

 Question Why

 Permissible Cry

 Seek Silence

 Self Reliance

 Practice Strong

 Like King Kong

 Guiding Heart

 Fresh Start

 Moment Anew

 Gifting You

 Inhale Breath

 Embrace Death

 Relish Being

 Eternally Seeing

 All Above

 Remember Love

Reviews

[Mitali Shah]

Lovely write up KWP. Every line with just two words says it all. :) Keep it up

[KWP]

this was the one I was referring to that I thought was similar to yours X

[Mitali Shah]

Yep dear completely agree :)

[Ana B.]

A beauty to behold.....a very smooth and beautiful write, full of everything. Gorgeous.

[Brittany Zedalis]

I agree with Chris in that this is a bit choppy, but I also understand that different writers have different writing styles, and I have definitely written my fair share of choppy poems, haha.

We must indeed remember love in the end, who are we without it? Wonderful work. :)

[KWP]

are you on that same ship out at sea with Chris ??? hehehe

Ok so the choppy - hmmm - well when this was written it was like you know when a thousand thoughts run through your head and they all seem to contradict themselves - they beat up against each other looking for answers - but usually to no avail - so the choppy feel is natural - it passes - just like everything else :)

BUt thank you chick for taking the time to read and give me your honest perspective - means a lot XXX

[sereenaoutloud]

oh love this write, it flows beautifully , short sweet and strong. Yes all above remember love!! You make this look so easy girlie!!
Happy mothers day x

[Sindu]

Such a resilient 'just that' filled write! Two words at a time.. slowly putting it out there, into the minds.

For the first time, it felt like something I would/could write. Really liked this one

[Einstein Noodle]

into my library it goes KWP ... excellent write says i! astoundingly beautiful in every aspect .. very much like this one!
E.

[cycy]

All Above
Remember Love
very well written dear i enjoyed this poem it was just a breeze pretty short and to the point i love how you coupled the words to bring out a deep meaning but without complicating it ,loved it and beautiful title too all in all its a lovely package dear

[Robert]

I don't know if this is true or not, but it seems when I read your poems and this one, does it come easy for you? The poem is just an easy gliding read. I just wonder if its as easy writing it? Very lovely read.

[KWP]

Well yes you are right Robert - when I sit to write a poem it's like I tap in and it gushes out - where I fail is in the editing - so many of my poems could (I believe) transcend to a different level if only I tapped in again - just gave myself a wee slap and a nice little lesson - thank you my friend X

[Robert]

You are welcome. I truly like your answer as that is what I was hoping for.

[KWP]

how bout you is it the same?

[Robert]

My poems that I believe are my best cone with ease. The poems that i have to work on over time, are not my favorite.

[KWP]

yes yes agree !! that space - that time and space we all like to hang out in X

[Robert]

**Come. Yep. I know what I'm saying or what I mean what I right. I find it so interesting how others that read it, take it.

[KWP]

yes well, we all have different eyes in which we view the world - the art of the transference and articulation the hard bit ... funny how it all makes sense in my head ;)

[Robert]

*write.....see typos. I'm on my phone. It makes sense in my head as well. I'm glad I'm not alone.

[ANTO]

I know they are out there but I don't think I've encountered such a poem before kwP.
Each line creates an image but then the next comes along - not unlike flashcards - they converge in the back of the mind as the next appears and soon they form a cohesive thread almost collage-like into a single image/story of the transitory nature of life and love.
We are but "...a blink in the eye of Brahma"
very cool-ly written indeed!
:))

[KWP]

Ooh well thanks you ... I remember writing this one and I remember enjoying the write if you know what I mean - for me right at that momento it contained so much of rushing gushing lushing thoughts - Brahma' blink yes I like that

Jai Guru Dev X

Love X X