Single Tear

a poem of acceptance

a single tear 

rolls down my cheek 

thinking of you 

in goodbyes

parting ways

i dared not speak 

darkness 

offers brand new light 

nothing shall 

remain the same 

connection is 

so brief 

together riding 

along the plane 

never venturing 

underneath 

we pushed we tried 

with all our might 

both knowing

all was lost 

a single moment 

was our plight 

love given 

at no cost  

as the tear 

is swept away 

within the gentle

evening air 

acknowledging

the lessons taught  

stripping my 

soul to bare 

Reviews

[Erik Daniel]

Very beautiful. I love it!

[KWP]

Cheers Erik thanks for swinging by xx

[Erik Daniel]

Of course! I started writing a book called Life After Love. I've posted a prologue and first chapter. You should check it out!

[KWP]

Will do Erik - love to xx

[redflutterby]

Wonderful flow and a touching sentiment! Acceptance is part of life yet sometimes difficult. Your words paint it well. ;-)

[KWP]

thank you beautiful .... go on read some more will ya ;) xx

[Anand Sehgal]

parting ways
i dared not speak
darkness
offers new light

A very realistic, emotive write :)
Liked every bit of it dear :)
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[KWP]

oooohhh well thanks for reading my friend x x x

[Devesh]

Loved this one! The words just roll off of the tongue when you read it, it has a very nice flow to it. The emotions that run through the words are beautiful. Thanks for sharing! =)

[KWP]

thanks for reading sunshine x x x

[Devesh]

You're most welcome! :)

[Daniel Dawes]

Amazing, sharp and to the point. It flows really well and the short lines are what makes it. Really enjoyed this and wouldn't change anything. Thanks for sharing :)

[KWP]

thanks Daniel ... appreciate you taking the time to read xx

[cycy]

wow, this is really deep, this one definitely struck a chord. well written, lovely poem. so full of emotion.

[KWP]

cheers lovely - was in a bit of a melancholy mood when I wrote it :) xx

[A. Amos]

What a brilliant start and heart gripping end? My dear friend your master of capturing soul of your readers. What magic words can create that is something I learn from your poetry....respecr

[KWP]

thank you my friend xx