It's Clear Ahead

a conversation

ME: 'It's clear ahead, follow me'
HE: 'How can you tell, what can you see?'

ME: 'It is not in what the eyes can see,
It starts by making friends with clarity'

HE: 'Clarity you say, I am confused
It's clear you said, that was your news.'

ME: 'Calm your thoughts, clear your mind,
Let's start here, leave all behind.'

HE: 'Calm and clear my mind you say
How will that help us on our way?'

'Leave all that is, what's the use?
What we leave we may need anew.'

ME: 'What lay ahead, we need for naught,
What lay ahead we have always sought.'

'The endless search, is already here,
It's just ahead, where it is clear.'

HE: 'You speech is nonsense, you've lost your mind?
There's nothing there, what do you hope to find?'

ME: 'No need to hope to find a thing,
Nothing is needed and I've nothing to bring.'

HE: 'You riddled words make no sense to me,
I cannot follow, for it's nothing I see.'

ME: 'Correct it is nothing and oh what a sight,
To finally see the beauty, to let go of the fight.'

HE: 'I believe your thoughts have turned you mad,
Clarity something you never had.'

'I will not follow, this journey is yours,
I bid you farewell and the best for your cause.'

ME: 'Right my friend, my time's arrived,
For this is the point for where I've always strived.'

'In the asking of questions, of myself and surrounds,
The continual struggle to find new unknown grounds.'

'To understand me, the where, how and why,
To know what will happen when one is to die.'

'It is clear ahead, but follow me not,
This life's knowledge gained I have simply begot'

'Within the essence of knowing and dreaming to dare
It's clear ahead, you can find me there.'

Author's Note

tell me what you think please :)

Reviews

[ANTO]

Sheer believability - faith in oneself - is enough to complete the whole journey KwP.
I love the dual convo format - then the shedding or purging of things and people (including voice number 2 - the inner negative voice) which hold us back - which occurs at a certain point in the journey when we have developed our belief.
I loved the 'have you gone mad' aspect of the conversation - the wit of it helped me stay with it. Its also helped to amplify the overall message.
I can see why this was a popular piece of writing my friend.
It is a strong one of yours. Thanks for the RR.
:))

[KWP]

Hey Bud - thanks for checking it out - I thought it may travel in your thought flow :) appreciated and happy evenin' to ya XX

[ANTO]

My pleasure K. It certainly reached its destination.
x

[Sarabelle]

This was a really amazing structure and I really like the way you suggest dialogue in the poem. Awesome job, I can't wait to read more from you! See, that's the thing about writers, there's just so many different kinds of styles that the come up with and then someone follows up on it and then someone else follows up on that and then....
I think you get the point. :)
Great job with the poem!!
♥Sarabelle♥

[Ayushi]

Simply awesome..
the way you maintained the flow is really interesting.

[Black Star Adept]

Wow, simply wow! I love the great teaching here and how the poem alone rhymes in such a great fashion! Great wisdom!

[Daydreamer]

STARTING TO LIVE xx yeeeee
call out all of the artists,dreamers,passionate people, givers,lovers,nostalgiac.....
that's the life we've chosen ourselves,fearlessly
everyday is a beautiful day xx every moment has a taste and every feeling has a vim xx all is valid, there's no wrong way to live 🌀🌀🌀
that's what we've chosen, to be awakened and ignited and so alive.. we've sank into the depths of meaning and essence... swallowed by whirlwinds of esctasy xx
we're so lucky to be us xx I have come to realise it's so rare when "life" happens to someone 🌈
It's a happy day xx

[KWP]

you are a such a shiny bright star ..... :D xx

[Daydreamer]

Goodness meeee xx
😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

[Daydreamer]

You paint a smile on my face x
much love 😍

[Crystal Ellyson]

Awesome!!!! The poem is truly inspirational!!!! I love it!!!! Great Job!!!

[KWP]

:D yay you made my moment x x

[s y e]

Damn gorgeous, this is one poem. This was a inspirational conversation/poem you've written here! YOU are an inspiration to many. I loved this one, I really enjoyed it; YOU ROCK!

[KWP]

hey selfie queen... so happy you liked x x MWAH xxx

[MsJewel]

What a wonderful inspirational poem to read in the morning. Very well done my friend

:) Julie

[Luissanto]

A very well written piece. I enjoyed it immensely. Thank You for sharing...

[NoelHC]

It would appear you have achieved a clear uncluttered view of life and what is important. I enjoyed the rhyming, and the consistency through out. I have heard a fable similar to the play EN discusses in his review, with a similar conclusion. You have distilled that wisdom into these couplets.