Did you ever stop and wonder...

just a wee ditty pondering teeneee aspects of life...

Have you ever stopped to wonder,
Just how far you would have to run.
If you jumped upon a sunbeam,
Then headed for the sun.

Did you ever give much thought,
To rolling down that hill,
You know the one that Jack climbed,
Fetching water with young Jill.

Did you ever stop and ponder,
Why penguins don't have flight?
How are they to escape,
The Polar Bears at night?

And if you were a lady beetle,
Flying through the trees.
Would you prefer those colors,
To that of a bumble bee?

If you were a truth seeker
Would you bare a warriors heart?
To fight for ultimate goodness,
Right from the very start.

What if your lived your life
As an anonymous tree?
Big, small, old or tall,
Which would you prefer to be?

Can you even imagine
Travelling as a cloud,
Replenishing earth's cycle,
Round and round and round.

Did you ever stop to think,
Just where your rubbish goes?
Not giving it a second thought...
Perhaps it's time to know.

Can you imagine for an instant,
A quick life as a bubble,
Trying to just float away,
You bump and your'e in trouble.

Did you ever stop to think,
Is there some small thing you can change?
Just to see it out in the world,
More love in a rearrange.

Can you even bare to think,
If we had not invented fun,
We would all be a bunch of sad sacks,
All gloomy and all glum.

To me the cream upon the cake,
Is the fact that we invented money.
How bout I give you three loaves of bread,
In return for love and honey.

It is a funny little world,
We funny humans have created.
Remember it is with our thoughts,
That these connections are all related.

I only ask if you choose to think,
Ask if your intentions are real good,
Then all of us can start to feel -
Love the way we ought and should

Reviews

[Daydreamer]

Did you ever stop to think,
Is there some small thing you can change?
Just to see it out in the world,
More love in a rearrange.

Can you even bare to think,
If we had not invented fun,
We would all be a bunch of sad sacks,
All gloomy and all glum.

To me the cream upon the cake,
Is the fact that we invented money.
How bout I give you three loaves of bread,
In return for love and honey.

It is a funny little world,
We funny humans have created.
Remember it is with our thoughts,
That these connections are all related.

I only ask if you choose to think,
Ask if your intentions are real good,
Then all of us can start to feel -
Love the way we ought and should


#Super creative, lovely, and versatile! Extremely in love with your mind and style,KWP 😍😍😍
These stanzas touched me so much! again & again & again, RADIATE LOVE 🌌🌌🌌

[KWP]

i just read it back ... it needs some work on the timing .... you are my friend you should be telling me this chick chick !!! hahahaha ... I am glad you can get caught up in the feeling and not notice the problems so much x x x thanks girl xx

[KWP]

I am waiting for you to read the other one 'It's Clear Ahead' I think you will like it ... wanna know your thoughts x x

[Daydreamer]

Awww.. but I haven't sensored any timing errors, soul sista xD sorry for being useless in this matter :P
Alright then, off to read xx

[KWP]

I was kidding ... useless you are not ... very inspiring you be x x

[Daydreamer]

Way more inspiring you be xx
Sun beams 🎇🎇🎇🎇

[Crystal Ellyson]

Great and wonderful poem. This poem really got me thinking about things. Love it!!!

[KWP]

thank you so much for reading Crystal .... so happy you enjoyed x x

[Deuces]

Very profound piece. A lot of jewels of wisdom in this. As a lover of the rhyme, I enjoyed the rhythm. Definitely positive and full of thoughts we as humans bypass in our busy lives. I especially liked the reference to the invention of money and it's relation to our old barter system. Enjoyed!

[KWP]

hey why thank you so much for reading ... and lovely to meet you too ... so happy you enjoyed x

[Eve Ola]

A very beautiful poem indeed.

Can you imagine for an instant,
A quick life as a bubble,
Trying to just float away,
You bump and your'e in trouble.

just amazing Well done

[wordman]

I wonder every day about one thing or another most things I have no idea how or what
a vast sky with all it`s splendors and secrets or humans and animals yes I wonder

[KWP]

yes yes .... i think that is a poets way ... hehehe .... x

[Matching Socks]

You took me from a land a childlike fantasy to some more serious thought provoking thoughts.
Really enjoyed this on a lot. Such a beautiful flow and rhyme and some really great imagery.
Fantastic!


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[KWP]

Hey Gorgeous Gal thanks so much for swinging by ... I am so happy you enjoyed this one ....


Sending love from my side x

[Matching Socks]

Love back at ya darlin'. :-)

[Rene Salinas]

In the writing by the name"Letters to a young poet number eight" by Rilke there is a fragment that asks How could we forget those ancient myths that stand at the beginning of all races, the myths about dragons that at the last moment are transformed into princesses? I tink this writings as inviting as it is is reminding of the necessity to find imaginative thinking. To embrace cold thinking and warm it with a value added to it. To dig and bring back the desire and questions that are of child like nature becuase of their purity.

Let's try to imagine

Thankyou

[KWP]

gee you write some thoughtful words .. and yes ... if we continue to view the world with child like eyes then the wonders and love will never cease ...

thank you again my friend x x

[Justin]

that was really good!!! i enjoyed it :)

[KWP]

ahhh cheers again Justin ... glad you like my simple words x x LOVE x

[Justin]

your welcome, simple words sometimes speak the loudess

[KWP]

yeah - you know what - that exact thought has what i have been arriving at lately - thank you J xx

[Justin]

your welcome, everything will be fine :)

[Simran Kewlani]

This is really good. Turns out you're a nature freak(positive way)