Boyfriend in a Coma

completely random

"Boyfriend in a coma"

Were you always like this?

There's something amiss

She thinks, as she stares into space

You used to be fun

Go, get things done

But that was a long time ago

You used to be sweet

swept me right of my feet

Remembering loves young dream

Are you smoking something funny?

Why you never got any money?

She's not sure she knows him anymore

You look so pale an peaky

Cloak and dagger, oh so sneaky

Looking at him now, it's clear as day

Opening the door, a bad aroma

Found him lying in a coma

She sits and cries with heavy head in hands

She was on the verge of leaving

but now sits alone and grieving

Is there something she could've done to save him?

Where did it all go wrong?

With him she did belong

So she took her life and joined him one more time

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Reviews

[keith]

a unique view of questions ... why?
desperate moves for the desperate
good write

[KT-B]

thank you - I'm not sure where this one came from, just trying something different :)