That was yesterday

That was yesterday

A Poem by KT-B
"

a new day

"

"That was yesterday"


Yesterday, was black

I don't want you back

to dampen my mood

you're bad not good

evil lurking in wait

you, I don't appreciate

get out my life

stop causing me strife

it's not what I seek

You wait til I'm weak

then strike

much to my dislike


That was yesterday

go on, try me today

I'll beat you back

courage you lack

When I'm strong

you won't belong

 never did

I will get rid

 all thoughts of you

the things you do


Angels reminded me

to stop and see

of their presence here

 I should never fear

but gently call their name

to prevent your claim

on me and mine

It was a spiritual sign

filled with love and care

My Angel, always there



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© 2017 KT-B


Author's Note

KT-B
about a dark energy

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I felt all the darkness and hatred for the person!
This poem made me shudder, also sort of scared tbh.
A very powerful and well worded poem, I don't see many forced rhymes even, just some grammar and word placements such as,
"When I'm strong
you don't belong"
Maybe "won't" would be better instead of "don't"
Keep it up!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KT-B

7 Years Ago

yes that does work better, thanks for that - it's a poem about an entity rather than a person - a sy.. read more



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So well written. I too, could feel the dark energy in this poem. It is captivating right from the start. Truly, a powerful poem. Well done!

Paul

Posted 7 Years Ago


I felt all the darkness and hatred for the person!
This poem made me shudder, also sort of scared tbh.
A very powerful and well worded poem, I don't see many forced rhymes even, just some grammar and word placements such as,
"When I'm strong
you don't belong"
Maybe "won't" would be better instead of "don't"
Keep it up!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KT-B

7 Years Ago

yes that does work better, thanks for that - it's a poem about an entity rather than a person - a sy.. read more

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