Cake like my mum used to make

Cake like my mum used to make

A Poem by KT-B

"Cake like my mum used to make"


On Saturday I made a cake just out the blue

My mum used to make this so I knew what to do

Chuck in some sugar, butter whisk then add some eggs

sieve in some flour, then pour out all the dregs

Into a lightly greased baking tin round or square

bake in the oven til it's just darker than fair


Whilst it's baking get your icing sugar dish

add some butter and milk mix and give a swish

then do the same in another dish without adding butter

look out a cake dish and a cake cutter

take out the cake but WAIT til its cool

or you'll take it out too early like a bloody fool


Once it's cool and you cut it in two

smother it with strawberry jam and the butter icing glue

stick the other half on top then the other icing

my mouth is watering this cake is so enticing

to finish of this lovely treat you just need a flake

crumble it on top and that's how you make

a cake just like my mums, so very yummy

my kids love when I make this the best darn mummy


*****

© 2016 KT-B


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This is entirely clever, KT... Like a poetic recipe. In all the time that I have been reading/reviewing poetry I have never seen anything quite like this. It is absolutely unique and superbly written. Swear I was drooling by the end and now have a horrific sweet-tooth. Am on the most strict diet on earth so this was like semi-torture for me, but at least I am still allowed to dream. Sigh... No one can make cakes quite like a mother can as it is sprinkled with an ingredient that causes eat bite to taste all the more divine and that is simply 'love'.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KT-B

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your wonderful review you had me laughing out loud when you said you were on a di.. read more
Beautiful Intentions

8 Years Ago

Ahaha.:) Glad we could share a laugh!



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'Cake like my mum used to make'
KT-B,
Your own mom was the one to give inspiration for this poem of cake prepaation. I enjoyed your step by step experience shared and rhymed. A cake with strawberry jam in the middle sure would be delicious. I'll bet that it would be fun to share. Thanks for this time in the kitchen with you. So fun!
Blessings,
Kathy

Posted 5 Years Ago


This is so sweet and lovely, nice rhyming scheme

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KT-B

8 Years Ago

thank you for your review, much appreciated :)
This is entirely clever, KT... Like a poetic recipe. In all the time that I have been reading/reviewing poetry I have never seen anything quite like this. It is absolutely unique and superbly written. Swear I was drooling by the end and now have a horrific sweet-tooth. Am on the most strict diet on earth so this was like semi-torture for me, but at least I am still allowed to dream. Sigh... No one can make cakes quite like a mother can as it is sprinkled with an ingredient that causes eat bite to taste all the more divine and that is simply 'love'.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KT-B

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your wonderful review you had me laughing out loud when you said you were on a di.. read more
Beautiful Intentions

8 Years Ago

Ahaha.:) Glad we could share a laugh!

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