self exorcism

'Oh, my children.. I implore you.. tear down your foundation.. rebuild' ^_^

Eyes are windows into the darkest rooms even blinded, shadow is undeterred evoking spiritual suicide homicide justified serenity genocide immersed in masochistic tendencies even blinded, I reach out a forced comfort reviled consort consumable convert the melody of one bitter sweet heart even blinded, I march to the rhythm excessive loss of faith cherish apathy and fate mentally abused state remaining trace elements of a soul divided even blinded, it cries out ashes swept away whimpers “can I stay?” whispers “can’t I stay?”

Reviews

[Butterflymom]

WOW, this is wonderfully penned, and very powerful. You are very original, creative, and fresh. Great piece.

[beccaz123]

Really good, made me think. Can't wait to read more of your writing!

[Markymark]

I like the feel of this piece....the abstraction is somewhat befuddling, but I like figuring things out. Good work. Can't wait to read something else.....


Markymark