Release

Release

(free write)

K.S. 6/2013

 

 

I’m burning hot, red fire within this passion.

Jumping back into the unknown, my head spins.

I’ll wear the lingerie you like,

we will stay up all night.

I know you like to be in control but honey let go

and put down your pride.

Needing you next to me because I’m fading away.

I’m hungry for you.  Let’s devour each other.

We both do fine alone, calling on no one

but lonely is different and nights get cold quick.

Set me on fire and send me up in smoke

make love to me slow and watch the embers glow.

The memories I want to keep,

wearing your shirt to bed every night of the week.

It’s hard I know to give it up and keep going,

but we need to move forward so baby get to releasing.

I want to lay next to you and know you inside and out.

Teach me all about your anatomy.

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Reviews

[Trace]

very interesting and revealing. Trace

[ron]

Its a very good poem about how when a couple move away from what they were and she is needing him back in her life. I like it, and I can relate to it.

[K.S.78]

Thank you for the great review!

[Forest Green]

Charming, and riddled with poetic nuance...

Nice work...

[K.S.78]

Never thought of it as charming but reading it again I can see the fun in it also so thank you for the new perspective :)