Charming

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Charming

 

I crave your mouth, my lips on your skin, your jawline.

Trying to fall asleep lingering in this mess I whine.

Starving I crawl through our sheets and fixate on you.

Even though I leave your bed at four a.m., I won’t leave you.

Our language doesn’t come easy.

You happened to me.

This is far from problem free.

Still I am yours and you are not mine.

I keep having that feeling every day that I need to see you soon.

Praying that my prince will be here shortly.

 

K.S. 5/2013

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

Well, jealousy dwells in the house of Venus and I am without the tongue that teases K.S.. : ) Beautiful words... I can't even attempt to pull out of my mind what would not sound like wishing to be there in this place where you are. This is so very strange to me. lol Heck, I may even be jealous of the sheets!! : ) I don't get jealous, but my wishing is rushing and coursing throughout my body. When I have looked in my own folder to upload a picture I took or some Google "free" image, there is all this scenery and whatever it may be. The picture you use of this girl is stunning!! I have written poems called Shannon, Lily, and Audry of Andover just TRYING to picture such a gorgeous girl. Beautiful picture, wonderful poem, and amazing feeling I get reading you. Not even sure how to say thanks. I always write some opinion and then when I visit your page, I kinda feel like I am on a date or indulging in what my mind NEEDS and not what it finds cheap imitations to in my life..... I don't know. You are incredible and my friends on my friend list that know me, wouldn't understand these comments of mine on your writing. lol ...Thank You!! xoxox -Mark

[K.S.78]

Lol, thank you! That girl is me hahaha I change my hair A LOT!!! ;)

[Patrick Henry]

Wow!! Part of me is embarrassed a bit and the other part just wants to say that I think I saw a similar pic on another poem of yours, and she... I guess, you,.... is one of the most beautiful girls I've seen since High school!! lol I never like reading what I've written, but I can imagine that I voiced my "liking" of the pic, but hopefully not in detail, for that would be unnecessary. Yeah..... unnecessary works!! lol I wish I could say something that has never ever been said in history before, like "Looks don't matter"... but I don't like to lie. lol I Love the way you write.... I made freakin' popcorn last time to read another one of yours. : ) xoxo -Mark

[Zero_Edge88]

Beauty is the taste of the insatiable feelings that reminds us that it is never far from where we are in the beginning.

It speaks out in the form of words that write itself out so eloquently it needs not to be elaborated by the weight of its elegance. It speaks so sweetly that it reminds you to go to bed but what tomorrow brings the anticipation is one that cannot be held in check. For what better beds the mind but of that bed that shares the feelings and insights of another. It is not to sleep alone but to sleep in togetherness it wraps its way around.

As of what it entails lead it to a new level, direction and dimension that it may create a space where universes alike create a bridge of the stars that cross into dreams. It is charming, beauty and indulgence to where the life shines upon this conversation begs to say. :)

[K.S.78]

"For what better beds the mind but of that bed that shares the feelings and insights of another."- I believe in this wholeheartedly! It would be so much better if she didnt have to leave at 4am lol ;)