Shadow Advice

Shadow Advice

A Poem by K.S.78

Shadow Advice

K.S. 2013

 

He couldn’t love my cheeks or my nose.

The tears that flow are rivers which stream slowly.

No help no consoling me his heart is froze.

Think of her just smile sweet and agree.

 

What would happen if you never saw her again?

Would those same rivers flow down your cheeks then?

All that she was would then be yours.

You think she is alive but she is dying running out of time.

 

Fix her, clean her and erase all painful memories.

Remember she trusts you to teach her.

Be kind, speak slowly she was your lover.

Don’t argue, no crying she’s had too many bullies.

 

She is used to being used and left alone.

She is small and tangled up in her head.

If you can be dependable she will change from stone.

All of her walls and defenses watch her shed.

 

Live life hand in hand, be happy as you go.

No longer dark no longer night for it is now day.

Out in sunlight watch her as she grows.

You did it; you are completed stay in the present,

Today.

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© 2013 K.S.78


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Oh tragedy falls upon you my saddest muse,
For why cry, your eyes are not my lies as they are
conjured by the silence you make as I try to make you talk.
It is the sadness in these eyes that I see what pains and ails you.

For no body of water flows deeper in that body of land you call your self. For such depth is what makes those tears drown those who look on your eyes. True beauty is truly unraveling, unrelenting and unbelievable.

We are used to the nature of our singularity but we are taken care of by those who reach out. The help is up to us to teach ourselves to move forward. Bullies are but what we call the weakest links as they are the ones who are truly feeble-minded as they have no power over to the one who stands to them. This is where we go, this is where we change in life and in life we trust the change.

Move past to where we go as to see what is in front and keep us in the rear view mirror. This is the past, this is where we don't belong. The future is right where no destination has been charted yet. So light out your bright lights and shine not the littlest light but the brightest and biggest one out there for you to see. This is the act of what today will bring for you.

Beautiful piece, tragic really though but it is a magnificent piece nevertheless. What beauty really is, a story of a love that is fallen from grace but is saved by grace also! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

K.S.78

11 Years Ago

Awe thank you
Zero_Edge88

11 Years Ago

You're very welcome. Writing is a beautiful gift isn't it? For what we share is not found in between.. read more



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Oh tragedy falls upon you my saddest muse,
For why cry, your eyes are not my lies as they are
conjured by the silence you make as I try to make you talk.
It is the sadness in these eyes that I see what pains and ails you.

For no body of water flows deeper in that body of land you call your self. For such depth is what makes those tears drown those who look on your eyes. True beauty is truly unraveling, unrelenting and unbelievable.

We are used to the nature of our singularity but we are taken care of by those who reach out. The help is up to us to teach ourselves to move forward. Bullies are but what we call the weakest links as they are the ones who are truly feeble-minded as they have no power over to the one who stands to them. This is where we go, this is where we change in life and in life we trust the change.

Move past to where we go as to see what is in front and keep us in the rear view mirror. This is the past, this is where we don't belong. The future is right where no destination has been charted yet. So light out your bright lights and shine not the littlest light but the brightest and biggest one out there for you to see. This is the act of what today will bring for you.

Beautiful piece, tragic really though but it is a magnificent piece nevertheless. What beauty really is, a story of a love that is fallen from grace but is saved by grace also! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

K.S.78

11 Years Ago

Awe thank you
Zero_Edge88

11 Years Ago

You're very welcome. Writing is a beautiful gift isn't it? For what we share is not found in between.. read more
hey

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on May 31, 2013
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