Ten Years From Now

Ten Years From Now

A Poem by Alex P.

You look at us with scornful eyes,

We’re different that is true

But I’ll bet you’ll never find what we have

 

All of you have forgotten

It’s not all just physical

How can you scrutinize

When you still haven’t found

The happiness we share?

 

You’re all a bunch of hypocrites,

Saying your way works the best

I’ll believe it when I see it,

Time’s the real test

 

Mind over matter,

Isn’t that what they say?

We’ll see who’s right ten years from now

 

I’ll be at his side,

Happy as can be

And you’ll be stupefied

(On husband number 3)

© 2009 Alex P.


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Yes it is mind over matter, one doesn't mind because others don't matter. The last stanza was nice and sharp like a knife, I bet they felt that. We can only live one day at a time, so we should live those days for what they are and not live them in fear of the future or what might happen to us. Nice write.

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Hah, I got a good laugh from that last stanza. Nice as usual.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I need to not read these things while at the office - everyone wants to know what I'm laughing at. The last stanza is priceless. Well Done!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes it is mind over matter, one doesn't mind because others don't matter. The last stanza was nice and sharp like a knife, I bet they felt that. We can only live one day at a time, so we should live those days for what they are and not live them in fear of the future or what might happen to us. Nice write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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