Moving Forward

on the bike

arms and legs around you

hold tight

smiling, breathless

careless dreams fly

smells of leather, pine and sunshine

moving, pulsing, vibrant

like the world is all mine!

on the bike

my heart beats into you

trusting like never

soaring cross space and time

knowing we're together

custom made design

who knew today

you'd steal my soul

and we would ride

til time is done.

 

 

Buttercup arrives...

7/18/09  KathNehls

 

 

 

Reviews

[Tommy]

I need to get me a bike, the chopped kind. Cold this time of year, but come summer, well you have writ the rest. I like this piece of affection found on the back of a bike. Like a pair of sparrows gliding the roads they ride; flying down the highway on the wings of a dove. I do need to get me a bike. lol.

Great Write!
RLG,
Tommy

[Barbara Walker]

I could feel your joy in this and the wind across my face!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I really love the carefree feeling of this piece... letting go and trusting in love for that is the only way it can grow. Really beautiful work.

[April Child]

Leather, pine, being wrapped around "someone" on a fast ride. Oh my, yes please. That is quite a moment you capture, I can feel it, hear it, smell it, I want it!

[Bill Grimes Jr.]

Such romance and fancy........I love it my friend..........(and your poem too)......

Hope all is well with you and yours Kath.

Peace,
Bill :-)

[Orlando Murcia]

Such a longing feeling with great imagery
I loved your form and the way you expressed
yourself while feeling the poem itself at the same time

Nicely done!

Orlando M

[Angel's Lady]

Well, this just brings you to the edge, now doesn't it? Lifts the spirits! I found myself wanting to pick my feet up off the floor as I was reading it, because I was right there on the handlebars with ya! Great write!