Yes
A Poem by
SPINNING ON that dizzy edge
Today
I held my heart
in the palm of my hand
turned it round
to see
just where
it needs to be.
Cool
Like a shiny apple
or
maybe a magic 8 ball.
Closed my eyes
Asked the question
It said
This is right
So right.
© 2009 SPINNING ON that dizzy edge
Featured Review
Cute and sweet little poem.
But I only follow my heart if God puts it upon
my heart as the heart can deceive us and trick us.
the heart isn't always right and isn't correct.
Thank you for sharing this and thank you for
you lovely review left on my page.
Blessings. kindred poet
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
this was just a whimsical thought I had one day and it took shape. thanks for your nice review
10 Years Ago
It's a pleasure. you're very welcome. Blessings. kindred poet
Reviews
Cute and sweet little poem.
But I only follow my heart if God puts it upon
my heart as the heart can deceive us and trick us.
the heart isn't always right and isn't correct.
Thank you for sharing this and thank you for
you lovely review left on my page.
Blessings. kindred poet
Posted 10 Years Ago
Cute and sweet little poem.
But I only follow my heart if God puts it upon
my heart as the heart can deceive us and trick us.
the heart isn't always right and isn't correct.
Thank you for sharing this and thank you for
you lovely review left on my page.
Blessings. kindred poet
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
this was just a whimsical thought I had one day and it took shape. thanks for your nice review
10 Years Ago
It's a pleasure. you're very welcome. Blessings. kindred poet
Your heart is cool? That's not so good. It's one simple message which is good but shiny apple is random. Magic 8 ball fair enough, because your heart tells you what it wants.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Your heart is cool? That's not so good. It's one simple message which is good but shiny apple is random. Magic 8 ball fair enough, because your heart tells you what it wants.
10 Years Ago
thank you for your thoughts
That is a great comparison... magic eight ball to the heart for you should always follow your heart... A beautiful little poem.
Posted 15 Years Ago
That is a great comparison... magic eight ball to the heart for you should always follow your heart... A beautiful little poem.
2 of 3 people found this review constructive.
LOL I have a magic 8 ball. I lovd the simple beauty of this poem. Enjoyed Phantom........
Posted 15 Years Ago
LOL I have a magic 8 ball. I lovd the simple beauty of this poem. Enjoyed Phantom........
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
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Added on May 1, 2009
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SPINNING ON that dizzy edge Buffalo, NY
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Some of my work is very personal and some is flight taking fancy... a writer's prerogative... :)
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