ONCE HE'S GOT YOU...

ONCE HE'S GOT

YOU

IN HIS SPELL

YOU BEG FOR MORE

AND LIVE IN HELL

ONCE HE'S GIVEN

JUST A

TASTE

SUCH SWEET TORMENT

WHERE FINGERS

TRACE

ONCE HE'S TAKEN

JUST HIS FILL

YOU'RE NOT THE SAME

YOU HAVE NO WILL.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

well, now.. I am torn.. I want one.. then I don't.. then I do again.. jeez.. decisions, decisions... You make him seem like such a bad boy, can't help but want him... nice write.. I enjoyed.. yum...

[SPINNING ON that dizzy edge]

Every good girl loves a bad boy .... no doubt about it. Every naughty girl enjoys a bad boy as well. You know what I mean [wink] ;)

[AprilRN1210]

Takes a special kind of bad boy to keep up with a naughty girl.. :)

[Barbara Walker]

Seduced and reduced, I believe a lot of women will identify with this write!

[Creepy Swine Guy]

That's how we plan it. [Grin] Would you expect anything less from us? Your poem is crisp, and comes with a sharp point and a serrated edge.

Very nicely done.

[bob, small b. aka invs]

very cool and very hot at the same time. i read it through once before i even realized there was a rhyme scheme. the words just dragged me along. reading it the second time noticing the rhyme took nothing away from it. great writing and description.

[Shadow Writer]

You described me very well. lol I enjoyed this poem. There is something magical and scary when you fall under someones spell. Enjoyed. Phantom................

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Sounds like pure seduction at it's finest... love the straight forward approach to this piece.