And so it goes...

And so it goes...

A Poem by SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

Like pennies in a fountain

Like cards into a hat

Like wishes on a falling star

It comes right down to that...

Giant leap of faith

Outlined on a chart

You win and you lose

These games of the heart.

 

 

 

 

Kath Nehls

2/2/09

 

© 2014 SPINNING ON that dizzy edge


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I like it. it embraces the fact that love is a gamble. Toss of a coin ... cards in a hat ... my God woman ... I know how YOU spent your teen years. What would I tweak? I might change the line:

"It comes to that..."

to say

"It comes down to that..."

for the sake of meter, but that's about it. Otherwise ... to my ear ... this is spot on.

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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And you try to beat the odds, again and again and again! Something makes it worth our while!

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's the risk we take and we have to because if we don't we won't find that which we seek. So we keep going back for more, it's like some kind of madness... It's official, We are all mad! :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. I will add this to my library. Its greatness lies in its simplicity. Well-written.
Life is about risks and love is no different...

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I like it. it embraces the fact that love is a gamble. Toss of a coin ... cards in a hat ... my God woman ... I know how YOU spent your teen years. What would I tweak? I might change the line:

"It comes to that..."

to say

"It comes down to that..."

for the sake of meter, but that's about it. Otherwise ... to my ear ... this is spot on.

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Short and simple statement but so true... love has it's ups and downs. But it is always worth the risk.

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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SPINNING ON that dizzy edge
SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

Buffalo, NY



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Some of my work is very personal and some is flight taking fancy... a writer's prerogative... :) Read something of mine and I will read something of yours - very nice and simple and what a way.. more..

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