I Didn't Know
A Poem by
SPINNING ON that dizzy edge
wow - when it hits you...
Oh Sweet Baby,
Your love
is like the answer
to a question
I didn't know
to ask...
K
© 2008 SPINNING ON that dizzy edge
Reviews
Some questions aren't meant to be asked, they're unspoken but understood. For those people who truly believe in sharing love, it's the cure for all ills. I rather think this says it all. Beautifully written.
Thank you for sharing.
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
these few words say it all don't they? when it's right and true - exactly how it feels and you've captured it perfectly. glad you are happy hon.
*hugs*
laura
Posted 16 Years Ago
these few words say it all don't they? when it's right and true - exactly how it feels and you've captured it perfectly. glad you are happy hon.
*hugs*
laura
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This just makes me smile from ear to ear. That is exactly how love is!
Posted 16 Years Ago
This just makes me smile from ear to ear. That is exactly how love is!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
that's a brilliant statement. i love it.
Posted 16 Years Ago
that's a brilliant statement. i love it.
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
OH, SO MUCH SAID IN SO FEW WORDS! I LOVE IT! IT'S GOING IN MY FAVORITES...BARBARA
Posted 16 Years Ago
OH, SO MUCH SAID IN SO FEW WORDS! I LOVE IT! IT'S GOING IN MY FAVORITES...BARBARA
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Wow! I love this! Great job! Short, simple, direct, and most assuredly the absolute freaking truth!
Posted 16 Years Ago
Wow! I love this! Great job! Short, simple, direct, and most assuredly the absolute freaking truth!
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Love it! That "K" at the end is like a gavel pounding wood, the echo of a verdict ringing in the air.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Love it! That "K" at the end is like a gavel pounding wood, the echo of a verdict ringing in the air.
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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Added on July 11, 2008
Last Updated on July 15, 2008
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SPINNING ON that dizzy edge Buffalo, NY
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Some of my work is very personal and some is flight taking fancy... a writer's prerogative... :)
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