ABC of Waiting for You

While you analyze

while you bounce

while you consider

while you decide

while you examine

while you figure

while you gather

while you hatch

while you idealize

while you judge

while you kick it around......

while you lament

while you mope

while you need more and more and more

while you opine

while you play

while you quest

while you ramble

while you seek

while you twist

while you undermine

while you visualize

while you wait

while you x out all the options....

while you yearn

while you zzzzzz

 

I will decide what is best for me....ok, I'm done.

 

KNehls    4/3/08

 

Author's Note

I'm not bad...I'm just drawn that way... JR

Reviews

[Dani California]

haha!!! I love this!
No need for me to wander into depth about it,
it is what it is -- speaks for itself.

You decide... ! Yup... go girl.. !

[BrightEyes]

and there ya go - you've got better things to do than wait around for someone who doesn't realize what a gift you are. Let them do all their ABC's while you live life and move on without them. Yeah You!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Hey i can see your point here... hey if someone doesn't know hat they want then they aren't worth your time... kick'em on down the line... I really like the straight up take no prisoner style here.

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Kick a*s! Way to tell 'em! Great write! Exceptional job, actually!

[justjenn_2u]

You snooze you loose, huh? I like this because it shows how so many people miss out on the prize while they analyze too much. I have felt this way before and I could never quite get it out. You do such a good job with your word play!

Awesome job!

[Randy Mckenica -writers..]

x out all the options--well that's a stretch. otherwise a fun exercise in writing, isn't it? Interesting subject matter ;)

[Murphy]

No stone left unturned... each letter/line has obviously been well considered. A call to revisit / evaluate our ABC's from time to time. I like the way it picks up momentum (I read it aloud)... then the end. A decision has been reached; Judge Kath swings the gavel. Done. Nice job.