EMPTY

faith

 

lost

 

tried hard

 

to trust you

 

What did I expect?

 

Look inside yourself -

there's no soul.

Author's Note

FIB - formula is 1, 1, 2, 3, 5 & 8

Reviews

[robin]

Reminds me of 2001 a Space Odyssey " oh my God, it's full of stars". FIB eh? Creative idea. The inside yourself is quite strong/direct as if to say "don't look my way" because it follows after what did YOU expect. Or maybe because it leads us away from the voice to another who is referred to but we have no sense of. It can also be taken to mean "we have no soul", it's expected because it's shared. The FIB makes it interesting to feel if it has any further/added weight as a result. Curious.

[Murphy]

This has a hollow ring to it.... "look inside - there's no soul". Quite empty.