Mine to Be

Waking up ... with the notion

of love spinning gently in my head

Slept without...your potion

of loss that makes these feelings dead

Dreaming in...slow motion

of life if we lived in a perfect world

A sign, a poster, a slogan

of hope emotions lightly twirl

Whispered gently in my ear

so soft... I wonder if I can feel...

 

       Like twisted ribbons

            unfurling, free

         Inspiration flowing

        from grace of three

     There's still much life left

mine to hold

mine to be

stand proudly, bold...

my greatest days...

a heartfelt plea

for timeless measure

in front of me.

 

 

 

Kath Nehls 3/08 and 5/2/08

 

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

Like twisted ribbons
unfurling, free

Very nicely written!

[April Child]

my greatest days...
in front of me

Yes, wonderful words full of hope. The best is yet to come...

[Murphy]

My greatest days... in front of me. What a liberating thought... I love that! Nice job, Kath... keep it up... I see a little groove there.

[Ken Simm.]

This is just wonderful. A lovely gentle sound of expectation. Beautifully written.

[Silvia - Scribo, Ergo S..]

There is a notion of anxious expectation ... an off-to-find-and-seek-and-not-to-yiel. I like it. xxx