Dance With Me

Dance with me,

hold me in your arms and in your heart.

Make me smile.

Feel love for me in every part

of all we have left here to gain.

In love we'll search

outside the pain

not caused by us

but times before

we knew or held each other.

 

Simply say,

Let's be right for each other

Let's try new times, things, ways

Let's learn something that becomes ours...

Let me show you there's good to be had

Let me whisper my heart's desire

Let me hold you until

you know you could...

 

Answer just one small question

 

How will we know what we could be

until you chance to dance with me?

 

 

 

Kath Nehls 3/08

Reviews

[MrJodie]

It's wonderful. I can hear a tango playing in the background while I read this, tapping in time to the rhythm.

It's seems so plaintive, Kath, and confidently so. At first you're scared that love may not be but then you demand a chance to discover. Sounds so very familiar...

Excellent work. Keep it up!

[Murphy]

"Simply say, Let's be right for each other"...
"Let's learn something that becomes ours"... I love this... the simplicity of it all.

[Sally Edwards]

Beautiful and romantic, I love the the one small question, just so perfect in every way. sighhhhhhhh. and I love
hold me in your arms and in your heart., what a gorgeous line that is.

[April Child]

How will we know what we could be
until you chance to dance with me?

When you and me become we.... beautiful, when dreams come true. So romantic, the vision of you dancing together and starting to dance through life... sigh...

[Ken Simm.]

Simply, lovely. Pure, unadulterated Romance.

[LilyGrace]

I like this. Great sentiment and well written.
LGD