Patience - a rewrite....

Patience - a rewrite....

A Poem by SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

I don't do well with patience

I really suck at wait.....

 

 

wait - this is one of the ones I lost

back in FEB 2008

 

 

I will try another time maybe

I think - it's lost to fate

 

 

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© 2008 SPINNING ON that dizzy edge


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Great...
Loved it.

Awesome write.

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Tremendous. What do you Americans say? You go for it girl!

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Added on February 26, 2008

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SPINNING ON that dizzy edge
SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

Buffalo, NY



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Some of my work is very personal and some is flight taking fancy... a writer's prerogative... :) Read something of mine and I will read something of yours - very nice and simple and what a way.. more..

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