They're Gone, They're Lost!

They're Gone, They're Lost!

A Poem by SPINNING ON that dizzy edge
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Some are lost forever, others will never be the same.... I hate this - so very much.

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I tried not to be bitter

then looked and tried to find

all my missing moments

captured here in time

 

The days I poured my heart out

combined in with my soul

I looked to find the writing cast

Pain comes to take it's toll.

 

How could they have been lost?

Why were they not protected?

How could they be so careless?

Left unguarded and neglected?


But  with half-felt inspiration

I search to gain "writing deleted"

Not hang my head, or drain my eyes

My patience is depleted...

 

I can't get back the stories

The poems that nearly bled

from days and thoughts and

verses spun - from somewhere in my head...

 

 

 

 

 

Kath Nehls 2/11/08

 

 

© 2008 SPINNING ON that dizzy edge


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You captured exactly how it feels. I escpecially miss seeing my poems, and reading the comments on the bottom of the page. Now I have a whole lot of comments to poems which I have no idea fit with eachother. I'm saddened by the jumble of chaos construed by this. I was so proud to bring my friends to writers and point to which poems had won contest... and now I can't do that... It's just really a sad to see all the work every one put into this place... just disapear with one mouse click.

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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Yes indeed it does sting losing work one has labored over but just like a phoenix that rises from the ashes so shall new and exciting words:-)



Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

DItto! Boy, you sure said a mouthful! Good write! Perfectly capturing probably 99.9% of all of us in here! And, God, please forgive the Ignorant, for they know not what they do!

Posted 16 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.

Kath this is perfect. Yes...it was a blow beyond blows for me too. You've absolutely given impeccable imagery here...and have captured the emotion flawlessly.

Posted 16 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.

You captured exactly how it feels. I escpecially miss seeing my poems, and reading the comments on the bottom of the page. Now I have a whole lot of comments to poems which I have no idea fit with eachother. I'm saddened by the jumble of chaos construed by this. I was so proud to bring my friends to writers and point to which poems had won contest... and now I can't do that... It's just really a sad to see all the work every one put into this place... just disapear with one mouse click.

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.


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SPINNING ON that dizzy edge
SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

Buffalo, NY



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Some of my work is very personal and some is flight taking fancy... a writer's prerogative... :) Read something of mine and I will read something of yours - very nice and simple and what a way.. more..

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