LOST IN TIMEA Poem by SPINNING ON that dizzy edge |
There is deep emotional scarring between the lines of this powerful poem, Kath. I can feel the pain of an innocent child....I want to hug her and tell her everything will be okay. I want to answer the questions for her and tell her that her parents are disturbed people and that she is okay. It is not her fault. How tragic the emotional scars left by some parents. Still, the last line of this poem is so empowering, "Now kindly step aside." Dignity restored! Very well written and touching. lydia
Posted 16 Years Ago3 of 3 people found this review constructive. |
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Ok i get the message now that I read the other review, I think that deep and very powerful, I say keep up the writing.
Posted 16 Years Ago2 of 2 people found this review constructive. |
There is deep emotional scarring between the lines of this powerful poem, Kath. I can feel the pain of an innocent child....I want to hug her and tell her everything will be okay. I want to answer the questions for her and tell her that her parents are disturbed people and that she is okay. It is not her fault. How tragic the emotional scars left by some parents. Still, the last line of this poem is so empowering, "Now kindly step aside." Dignity restored! Very well written and touching. lydia
Posted 16 Years Ago3 of 3 people found this review constructive. |
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Added on February 6, 2008
Last Updated on April 14, 2008
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SPINNING ON that dizzy edge
Buffalo, NY
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Some of my work is very personal and some is flight taking fancy... a writer's prerogative... :) Read something of mine and I will read something of yours - very nice and simple and what a way.. more..Writing
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