Brings A Smile

Just a sweet, sappy thought in my dizzy head... If just thinking about you makes me smile, I am in trouble. So I am, thinking about you.   Now the sun shines in on my glad-to-be-me-this-morning face. It just did go up two notches - even the sun knows my heart is warmed by you. I am in trouble.   Your voice, your smile, your shoulders, your strut, ohhh your hands & deep chocolate brown eyes crinkle in the corners... twinge of butterflies inside. Remembering now ... the goosebumps on your arm when I kissed you - and you said "Our First Christmas Kiss" I am in trouble.     12/26/07 Kath :)

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Reviews

[April Child]

Lovely, lovely, lovely I hope you are in trouble and I hope you enjoy every minute of it!

Really sunny little poem, brought a smile to my face, captures that feeling so well, the smiling, the goosebumps and butterflies and the what might be.

Now the sun shines in on my
glad-to-be-me-this-morning face.

Yes please, I want that :)

[Liv(E)]

I love this. I totally relate to everything. It makes me feel warm and fuzzy with memories. :)

[Kevin Donahue]

how lucky is the man that wears a woman's admiration

lighthearted, lofty, romantic, fun

[Ken Simm.]

Oh Kath. I am so glad for you. Glad that you are in trouble in this way. Exquisite little write and you know what I mean. Ken.

[SM Davis]

This is sweet and warm. Just like the first Christmas kiss it speaks volume about the sweetness of beginning love. Very well done!

[Spoken]

This is a beautiful love piece. I love how you ended each line with 'I am in trouble'.. you know you're gonna get it, cause he makes you melt like warm putty.. and you are his for the taking! Great!