Stay With Me

I can send out sparks   with the   power of a tease   fingers trail   there is so much there   to know   If you want to know.   I can send it out   and reel it back - please   let me show you where...   here and here   yes, there.     A tip of the head   A flick of auburn hair   back from my face   soft against my back   and shoulders and   your chest.   Eyes direct and intense   they smile at you.   Without   even seeing my lips   you know I am smiling.   Lips parted as short of breath   they move to indent   where dimples nip my cheeks   blushing mauve and warm   warmest against your chest   Your chest I need to touch   to feel your heartbeat   with mine   now     I can hold your hand   and want to kiss each   finger separately   for all the wonderful   things they do to me   but I won't,   not right now   No stopping   please   the strings they play   the cords they strum   make me undone   all twisted in   the sheets     It's best when you can stay   all wrapped and tight   with me the pillow between   your knees   To be so full of you now   in so many ways   complete   To know that love has   held me with those hands   of yours   Your sweet words still   whispering in my ears   Such blissful, raptured   sleep...   with me.           © 2007 SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

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Reviews

[Rain]

Wow..
Torrid, but subtle in clever ways. Very erotic without going beyond. I liked this piece, alot. Rain..

[Kevin Donahue]

delicate, intimate, elegant, inviting in its tease

tasteful

a pleasure to read

[Roy]

Beautiful sensual piece. The intimacy and touching, especially the touching, are very well projected. I really like this a lot. From tease to twisted in the sheets. WOW!

[Ken Simm.]

Wonderful. A lovely lilting dream of a write. I enjoyed this very much. It has a subtly about it that resonates. Ken