Stay With Me

I can send out sparks   with the   power of a tease   fingers trail   there is so much there   to know   If you want to know.   I can send it out   and reel it back - please   let me show you where...   here and here   yes, there.     A tip of the head   A flick of auburn hair   back from my face   soft against my back   and shoulders and   your chest.   Eyes direct and intense   they smile at you.   Without   even seeing my lips   you know I am smiling.   Lips parted as short of breath   they move to indent   where dimples nip my cheeks   blushing mauve and warm   warmest against your chest   Your chest I need to touch   to feel your heartbeat   with mine   now     I can hold your hand   and want to kiss each   finger separately   for all the wonderful   things they do to me   but I won't,   not right now   No stopping   please   the strings they play   the cords they strum   make me undone   all twisted in   the sheets     It's best when you can stay   all wrapped and tight   with me the pillow between   your knees   To be so full of you now   in so many ways   complete   To know that love has   held me with those hands   of yours   Your sweet words still   whispering in my ears   Such blissful, raptured   sleep...   with me.           © 2007 SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

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Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

I love the sensual appeal to this. However did I miss you?

Much applause!

[Gandré]

The love is there, always secretive and unrelenting.

[Jacqueline]

Go ahead with your bad self! (snaps fingers) You are displaying a sexy confidence that's hard to ignore or pull away from. This piece was the 'bees-knees'

[Murphy]

ooops... sorry. didn't mean to intrude... lol... Wow! seriously, though, this is sensational. what a mouth watering masterpiece... sparks flying, fingers trailing, fingers strumming, sweet words whispered... quite a moment you've captured here! nice write...

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

This is such a wonderful and touching piece.Brilliant!!!

[Christel]

I really like this piece! I feel I can relate to what your feeling, the moment. It's the first one , I am going to read more of yours. Kudos!

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Oh my...I do believe I'm blushing. You made my heart race. I felt a little bit like I was intruding on a private moment...oops! Applause, applause!

[A.J. Smith]

Wow, this is an awesome piece. You are very good.

[Jenny Davis]

This is sooo beautiful! My gosh I was awed by the passion that this emanated...lovely! :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Elegant eroticism. You grabbed my attention with your first line:

"I can send out sparks
with the
power of a tease"

Delicious! and another one that stands out is
"with me the pillow between
your knees"

Woooohooooo, Kath...this one really rocks! Lydia