Everyday Love

Everyday love that's what I want offered and given in return smile for smile hand in hand give and take hope and dream heart to heart   Everyday love that's what I want doubled and valued in return sitting close fingers meshed stories told filled silence affection answered   Everyday love that's what I want held and cherished in return Complete Unselfish Real  Sweet Neverending.     Maybe? k nehls 12/07         © 2007 SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

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Reviews

[An Ordinary Woman]

Me too!

I want what you want ... it sounds lovely to me ....
I really enjoyed this, appreciate the structure too.

Thanks for reading/ reviewing my little poem, "see me," I'm so glad you liked in. :+)

[Kevin Donahue]

A heartfelt plight

That gets right to the point

and beats its drum thereafter

A mantra, a motto, a lover's plight

Personally, I can identify with this one =)

Enjoyed.

Kevin.

[April Child]

Sigh.... its what we all want when all is said and done and its what we are lead to believe in but whether it exists, I dont know, it certainly does for a time the question for me is whether it can endure without turning into those comfy old slippers...

Nice write.

[Creepy Swine Guy]

Tis a wonderful poem and a noble desire. I can hear the longing in your words. I'd suggest adopting a dog. Men are pigs ... ask Siobhan, she'll tell you

[JadedKimber]

I like that you wrote "myth" for your description...lol :) I often wonder if this kind of love is a myth. I really like the format, and the way this flows together so smoothly...Kudos! Kimberly

[Lydia Shutter]

Isn't this what we all want? The kind of love that has a strong foundation and is honest. The kind of love that endures all things and gets through the rough spots. Beautifully expressed, Kath. Lydia

[Ken Simm.]

Wonderful, this flows like a song. This should have music. Lovely. Ken