Everyday Love
A Poem by
SPINNING ON that dizzy edge
Everyday love
that's what I want
offered and given in return
smile for smile
hand in hand
give and take
hope and dream
heart to heart
Everyday love
that's what I want
doubled and valued in return
sitting close
fingers meshed
stories told
filled silence
affection answered
Everyday love
that's what I want
held and cherished in return
Complete
Unselfish
Real
Sweet
Neverending.
Maybe?
k nehls 12/07
© 2007 SPINNING ON that dizzy edge
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Awe yes isn't that what we all want. Beautiful write, much emotion show here,
xoxo
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Sounds like the right kind of love to pursue! Lovely poem! :-) Sharon
Posted 16 Years Ago
Sounds like the right kind of love to pursue! Lovely poem! :-) Sharon
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Very nice. I love the sentiment of this, and the simplicity. Great work!
Posted 16 Years Ago
Very nice. I love the sentiment of this, and the simplicity. Great work!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Beautiful thoughts, penned clearly and poetically. I like it a lot.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Beautiful thoughts, penned clearly and poetically. I like it a lot.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I love the phrase "everyday love" as so often one dreams of fantasies that could not possibly be fulfilled...a wonderful write expressing what love is all about...the everyday life two people lead together.
laura
Posted 16 Years Ago
I love the phrase "everyday love" as so often one dreams of fantasies that could not possibly be fulfilled...a wonderful write expressing what love is all about...the everyday life two people lead together.
laura
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
That's what I want to, I almost lost it once, was married long enough that I didn't appreciate what's here at home. This is a lovely, beautiful write.
Posted 16 Years Ago
That's what I want to, I almost lost it once, was married long enough that I didn't appreciate what's here at home. This is a lovely, beautiful write.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This is beautiful. I think it captures exactly what we all want.
Posted 16 Years Ago
This is beautiful. I think it captures exactly what we all want.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This is simply wonderful in its wording and message - I love it! And it is easy to relate to because it's what most of us are hoping for in our lives. Thank you for writing this lovely piece. ... TD :)
Posted 16 Years Ago
This is simply wonderful in its wording and message - I love it! And it is easy to relate to because it's what most of us are hoping for in our lives. Thank you for writing this lovely piece. ... TD :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Very well put. I love one word lines and thoughts that say soooo much more than just one word. Really enjoyed reading this...and yes, it's out there!
:) :)
~Kurt~
Posted 16 Years Ago
Very well put. I love one word lines and thoughts that say soooo much more than just one word. Really enjoyed reading this...and yes, it's out there!
:) :)
~Kurt~
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I think that's what we all dream of and sometimes think we have. It amazes me that some people can be married for 50 years and it comes so naturally... Others... well, not so much. I really love this. It conjurs up sweet dreams.
Posted 16 Years Ago
I think that's what we all dream of and sometimes think we have. It amazes me that some people can be married for 50 years and it comes so naturally... Others... well, not so much. I really love this. It conjurs up sweet dreams.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Some of my work is very personal and some is flight taking fancy... a writer's prerogative... :)
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