Everyday Love

Everyday Love

A Poem by SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

Everyday love

that's what I want

offered and given in return

smile for smile

hand in hand

give and take

hope and dream

heart to heart

 

Everyday love

that's what I want

doubled and valued in return

sitting close

fingers meshed

stories told

filled silence

affection answered

 

Everyday love

that's what I want

held and cherished in return

Complete

Unselfish

Real 

Sweet

Neverending.

 

 

Maybe?

k nehls 12/07

 

 

 

 

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Awe yes isn't that what we all want. Beautiful write, much emotion show here,
xoxo

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds like the right kind of love to pursue! Lovely poem! :-) Sharon

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Kay
Very nice. I love the sentiment of this, and the simplicity. Great work!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Roy
Beautiful thoughts, penned clearly and poetically. I like it a lot.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the phrase "everyday love" as so often one dreams of fantasies that could not possibly be fulfilled...a wonderful write expressing what love is all about...the everyday life two people lead together.

laura

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's what I want to, I almost lost it once, was married long enough that I didn't appreciate what's here at home. This is a lovely, beautiful write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful. I think it captures exactly what we all want.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is simply wonderful in its wording and message - I love it! And it is easy to relate to because it's what most of us are hoping for in our lives. Thank you for writing this lovely piece. ... TD :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very well put. I love one word lines and thoughts that say soooo much more than just one word. Really enjoyed reading this...and yes, it's out there!

:) :)
~Kurt~

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think that's what we all dream of and sometimes think we have. It amazes me that some people can be married for 50 years and it comes so naturally... Others... well, not so much. I really love this. It conjurs up sweet dreams.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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SPINNING ON that dizzy edge
SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

Buffalo, NY



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