Another First Kiss

Fingertips so gentle up my arm
a touch so sweet - light sugar
With eyes closed
I wonder if it is real
or just the wish of all
those nights alone
gliding across my forgotten skin

I wonder how a hand so big
can be so gentle
as you tucked tussled hair
behind my ear
Your thumb grazed
my chin to tip it up
to look into your eyes -
Yours into mine...

A kiss, a first kiss now
with the pulse of you
or me
in my ears
We stand so close
there is no room
for thoughts of
stopping
I don't want to stop
this first melting chocolate
kiss

Lips warm and soft,
parting, gentle,
the tip of your tongue...ahh
firm and moving
oh so slowly
towards my neck...
my earlobe...

I am undone...


kath nehls 9/21/07

haha - was 6/23/07!!!

Reviews

[A. Amos]

This was elegantly sensual, enjoyed this passionate piece of art!

[SPINNING ON that dizzy edge]

thank you for your kind review. this was a life changer :)

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome

[MsJewel]

How lovely...this first melting chocolate kiss...
and the ending...perfection!

I love romantic poetry and your poem is stunning.

:) Julie

[SPINNING ON that dizzy edge]

thank you for your kind words - it was quite exciting ;)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow yes, this is a very romantic write...you had us feeling it. longing for that second kiss.

[Sami Khalil]

Sugary, lovely, romantic...:)................

[melissa]

i liked it alot

[Donald Meikle]

A nice so nice beginning, An appetizer so to speak, not the easiest thing to do, and yet the pangs of hunger shudder through, creating moving feelings as the wetness of saliva slips to hold, those dreams when I would never be so bold, but then I realized I'm old.

[Ashen]

OMG! I could imagine that happening to me so well i almost felt it! I love it!

[Derek S.Keck]

There is nothing more beautiful or meaningful to totally open yourself up to the vulnerability of love and desire. Wonderful poem!

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