Impasse

Should I stay or should I go

Deciding what to do is hard

it's not just from your head

Toss around the pros and cons

of all the things we said

My way is what's good for me

You have other plans

Pressure building all the time

That's just how it stands

I have things that cannot change

You have your piles too

Can sit and stew for hours now

on what we need to do

Love plays parts that cause us pain

Half empty is the glass

You won't budge and we create

a sorrowful impasse.

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Expectations from those that we love tearing us apart because we cannot live up to these expectations and even going as far as to state that our expectations could quite possibly be what they regard with disappointment. To each their own, I say, and I must say that the impasse (I see where you've got the name now) and striving for a detente you portray are both so poignant and very well-written. Well done.

[SPINNING ON that dizzy edge]

thank you Tai for the review and you have even a sense of poetry in your reviews! excellent

[nafisa]

There is nothing better than reading and feeling your mind expand, pondering all kinds of thoughts. Once again, i loved this

[SPINNING ON that dizzy edge]

Very kind of you to stop by and say such nice things

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I believe at some point in our lives we all have been through exactly what your poem states! The flow was awesome!

[SPINNING ON that dizzy edge]

Thank you for your review. You are so right. Not always easy to make everyone happy. There are times to take a stand and they don't always go our way... life

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

You are welcome!

[writing mojo]

Been there before..I like that the poem is not predictable and it's perfect intersection of self reflection with outer expression makes the unknown a clear point..good piece

[SPINNING ON that dizzy edge]

Thank you for your nice review... glad you liked

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That is always a tough decision when you love someone but you are not sure if you are still right for one another, the question is can you accept each others differences without hurting one another.

[SPINNING ON that dizzy edge]

Thanks of the comments Advice to a friend in a tough spot. Love does make it hard to make decisions clearly.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome.