Broken

not feelin like being... period

broken dreams this broken day, broken spirit, in every way, broken hearts, my lungs lie on a surgical tray, i have been silenced on the broken day, these broken hands can feel no broken glass, these broken nerves cant feel this broken past, these broken breaths i breathe for nothing because the only thing the breathe for was not ment to last

these broken feet can walk no more, im on my knees begging to breathe, choking on oxigen i feel nothing but need like im popped op on oxycotin, broken hands from these wars long foughten the reasoning long forgotten, through these broken eyes you can see the broken dreams, but only a broken soul, will know what it means. My heart is bursting through these broken seams. broken brain, so insane, all in vein, so much pain, i tryed too hard, i love too much, i destroy everything i touch, these eyes they cry no more, no more tears, and nothing to fear, nothing to love and no one to be loved by. forever broken is why i cry, forever broken until i die, in this prison of thoughts, forever broken i will cry

Reviews

[Carly Hood]

I absolutely love the beginning lines. Beautiful: filled with pain. The ending got a little fuddled up. I would go back and try to keep the same tone you had at the beginning. Good Good.

[No name]

This was a beautiful piece filled with emotion. I can say that it takes a lot to feel this way and should never break you down, try to stand taller then it. Nice write.