The fallen angel

my one and ONLY free verse

her eyes show you pain
and her beauty makes u want to comfort it
her lonlyness
makes u want to love her
her tears, make the angels burn
and her skin in my hand, ment nothing
my heart offered to her brought only sorrow
but yet this angel still draws me in 
and to stop loving this magnificent creation is a sin 

Author's Note

my one and only free verse, ENJOY

Reviews

[Sarah]

It is lovely, it gives a lovely image when you read it. nice work