Hydrogen

A poem for my boyfriend, Jake. I love you.

His words crafted a vessel

 

 

And I don’t know

Where he got the elements

 

 

But with him

It was safe

To stain the whitecaps

 

 

A more fitting undertone

Author's Note

Any thoughts are always appreciated!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the simple form and statements. Left the reader with thoughts and possibilities. Nice use of words and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Karen Zimmer]

Thank you so much for reading! Means so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. You are a amazing writer.