No more

Why do I have to stay here, when you are up there?

 

Im sick of bying stuck here, were no one accepts me and treats me like s**t.

I don't want his. I never had.

 

Since the day you left me, my heart has been broken. And it doesn't help at all, when other breaks my heart even more.

 

Im not even sure if there actually IS a heart in my chest anymore. Maybe it has been broken so many times, there is nothing left now.

 

Please, let me come up to you.

　

And when problems keep stabbing me in my stomach or back, it only makes it worse.

 

I wonna be with you.

 

And when the thoughts of suicide and cutting pokes to me, telling me to do things I will regret.

 

I just can't stand it anymore.

 

I wish it would all go away. I wish I could just close my eyes and make it all go away.

And I wish I could be like you. Have wings like you.

 

Then we could be together.

 

Forever.

Author's Note

plz ignore grammar problems, thx

Reviews

[Frankie Nguyen]

I like it (:

[E.H. Monroe]

Out of the three I've read this has the poetic kick in the a*s that I think you should persue. Try not to be so telling though. Let us be the judge of the subject matter. The envy of the wings and the wanting to go beyond are powerful signs. Don't forcefeed the audience. Serve it to us and let the reader's make their own call.

Nice work