Werewolves, are we cursed man-beast bound to earth for all eternity? Or
are we really shape shifting sprite guides sent here to protect humans,
as the Native American legends suggest? We are actually a little of both. No one knows when or where the first
werewolf arrived, as our legends have it, it was some time in the early
Mesopotamian era, in central America and in what would now be considered
Greece.
When we first started to transform we had no idea what was happening, so
obviously the first few generations freaked, for lack of a better word,
and started attacking villagers. Killing many of them, and this we
think, is where the Greek mythology comes from. Over the ages however,
we've learned to control ourselves. In the beginning, when we attacked,
we were only half shifted and didn't know how or even understand how to
let the entire transformation take hold. Once we did figure out how
we transformed completely to our wolven form, we found that our minds
were much calmer and we weren't as pron to violence.
Back in the early
years we used the light of the full moon to see, because we were only
half shifted so our eyesight was horrible, Due to that I suppose is
where the the transformation part of the legend came from. However the moon does not need to be full for us to change we can change anytime we like.
It is entirely possible to be turned, though not easy, the only way to
be turned is to be bitten... By an alpha and that rarely happens, alphas
are very particular about who they allow to join their pack. Those
chosen by the alpha are tested without ever knowing it, and if they pass
the bite comes without warning.
The only way you can become an alpha is of course to kill or defeat the alpha before you. Just to clear the
record we can be killed just as easily by a regular as we can by a
silver one. Silver dose not affect us as mythology states it will not burn our skin or cause us to roll over in pain.
While in our
wolven forms and running with our pack we communicate like regular
wolves, with the added benefit of being able to send our thoughts as
pictures into each others minds, it's not like telepathy, we can't read
each others thoughts we can only send pictures.
As for our life span, we live much longer than humans though not as
long as vampires, and speaking of vampires all those legends that say
we're in some sort of epic war and always fighting, not true we actually
co-exist rather peacefully, unless someone on the opposing side picks a
fight and kills some one on the other side, that will start (another), epic battle...
I'll be honest... I love wolves... Yet, the idea of the traditional werewolf is something I've never seen anyone writer about well. It's hard to get over the hurdle of cliche when it comes to them. But, you've created a solid historical idea with this piece. So, i'm willing to give it a chance and see where it goes. The one thing I might suggest in this piece is actuall having a reason why they began shifting.
In my own writen universe, werewolves is a misnomer. The reality was they simply were sorcerers that had the ability to take on a different shape. The reason for them shiftin in the first place was do to persecution by non magic users.
Take this someplace! I'll be interested in how it evolves.
Aaron - Wolfwind
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you once again for reading my work! I hope you will enjoy the story to come, it will take a wh.. read moreThank you once again for reading my work! I hope you will enjoy the story to come, it will take a while as I am still currently working at it. As for your suggestion you hit the nail on the head, so to speak, In the story Curse of the Moon I do cover how and why werewolves came to be. It is set in the time of the the Greek gods, the story takes us on a trip of love, betrayal, forgiveness and a vengeful fight that will lead to other discoveries. Like why there is an "epic battle" between Vampires and Werewolves. As my character Orion shares his life with the reader...
yes I never really did specify on who is talking but you will soon well maybe not real soon but even.. read moreyes I never really did specify on who is talking but you will soon well maybe not real soon but eventually find out who it is :D in my new book Curse of the Moon :D thank you for your review though!! and thanks for reading :)
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yeah that's the title of my book the curse of the night great minds think alike hon
I'll be honest... I love wolves... Yet, the idea of the traditional werewolf is something I've never seen anyone writer about well. It's hard to get over the hurdle of cliche when it comes to them. But, you've created a solid historical idea with this piece. So, i'm willing to give it a chance and see where it goes. The one thing I might suggest in this piece is actuall having a reason why they began shifting.
In my own writen universe, werewolves is a misnomer. The reality was they simply were sorcerers that had the ability to take on a different shape. The reason for them shiftin in the first place was do to persecution by non magic users.
Take this someplace! I'll be interested in how it evolves.
Aaron - Wolfwind
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you once again for reading my work! I hope you will enjoy the story to come, it will take a wh.. read moreThank you once again for reading my work! I hope you will enjoy the story to come, it will take a while as I am still currently working at it. As for your suggestion you hit the nail on the head, so to speak, In the story Curse of the Moon I do cover how and why werewolves came to be. It is set in the time of the the Greek gods, the story takes us on a trip of love, betrayal, forgiveness and a vengeful fight that will lead to other discoveries. Like why there is an "epic battle" between Vampires and Werewolves. As my character Orion shares his life with the reader...
Thank you I'm working on a story now called, 'Curse of the Moon' it tells the story of the origins o.. read moreThank you I'm working on a story now called, 'Curse of the Moon' it tells the story of the origins of
werewolves :D like where they came from and how they came to be. See if you look it up you cant find any definitive answer like you can with Vampires so I'm doing this for the werewolve
aww thank you and I'm GLAD you do because I'm working on a story now called, 'Curse of the Moon' it .. read moreaww thank you and I'm GLAD you do because I'm working on a story now called, 'Curse of the Moon' it tells the story of the origins of werewolves :D like where they came from and how they came to be. See if you look it up you cant find any definitive answer like you can with Vampires so I'm doing this for the werewolves :D
11 Years Ago
awh, I sure would like to read it :)
11 Years Ago
its gonna be a bit I'm still working on it im only on chapter one and that is giving me some issues .. read moreits gonna be a bit I'm still working on it im only on chapter one and that is giving me some issues i cant get the flow going the way i want it to :(
I love writing, be it poetry, short stories or even full blown novels. (which I have yet to complete a full novel *giggles) I enjoy writing romance, I write M/M M/F F/F in all genres.
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